I like it already. Especially since our favourite captain lives. :)

this seamed like it came right out of the movie !

Great chapter! I really like how you added the accents (i.e. "my girl 'e appears...")!

So so so cute. I can picture everything from this chapter in my mind's eye perfectly. Thank you so much for the new chapter! :) I eagerly await your next update.

This is the best Captain Nicolls & OC story I've read. I'm really interested in any turn this story may take and would love to see it progress further! Please update again soon! :)

I love it !

I'm seeing a love story perhaps between Rosaline and James. ;) Or maybe there might be a surprise lol. Great story!

D'aaaaaww! A man is nothing if he can't quote a little Shakespeare :) I hope the Romeo & Juliet reference isn't foreshadowing tragedy to come ...

Oh this is going to be a great story!

I cannot wait to see where you go with this. Please, please, PLEASE update soon!

*Grabby hands*

This is ... Seriously adorable. I can't wait to read the rest!