| Reviews for The Black Nightmare |
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KelseyAlicia chapter 16 . 4/28 "If I had a single flower for every time I think about you, I could walk forever in my garden" "A smile takes but a moment but is effects sometimes last forever" "Love is reaching touching and caring. Sharing sunshine and flowers so many happy hours together. It was God who made the garden grow in your hearts." "Among God's best gifts to us are the people who love us" "A friend listens to our words but hears our hearts" "Friends they cherish one another's hopes. They are kind to one another's dreams." "What the heart gives away is never gone. It is kept in the hearts of others." |
TheWhisperingWarrior chapter 26 . 10/19/2019 So, so happy that you finished the story. I really liked the final battle and how Jade and Hsi were the ones to take down Daolong Wong. Too bad Jackie and the rest of the team could see them take down the dark wizard once and for all. For some reason towards the end I was afraid Hsi was going to have to sacrifice his demons powers in order to save Jade but he ended up sacrificing his chi and lifeforce. Love the idea of a sequel and in the meantime I'll look out for the bonus chapter. After reading the title I hope it means what I think it means... |
KelseyAlicia chapter 26 . 9/27/2019 amazing story! Loved all these Jade and Hsi Wu stories I read yesterday out of a sense of nostalgia. Couldn't comment on all of them as I was already according to my mom doing the wrong thing trying to read them all. But if you are saying there may be a sequal please do it! This is a pairing that really should've happened in the show and like to continue! Keep it up the great job! you are an amazing writer! |
Heart of the Demons chapter 26 . 9/26/2019 This story is full-on awesome thanks to your dedication to it. I'm really happy with the way you wrote the characters most of all, even Jade and Hsi Wu. Stories like this definitely tend to leave the reader wanting more. |
Victoria Taylor chapter 26 . 9/26/2019 I have read this story since the beginning and I am sad to see it finished. It was fantastic though. I love each and every chapter! I look forward to a possible sequel. |
reality deviant chapter 26 . 9/26/2019 well done for finishing! looking forward for a sequel! |
Crystale no otaku chapter 24 . 6/21/2019 Who-hoo! I'm soooo glad you found the motivation and will to continue this! I absolutely love it! And we got Hsi and Jade interaction to boot! Very glad she forgave him. I'll bet he was a bit humbled inside, too. Thank you so much for not abandoning this. I look forward to the rest, as usual. |
RandomUser chapter 24 . 6/6/2019 Actually came back to reread this incredible fic and I honestly had to do a double-take! There was an update?! At first I was like “nah! My eyes are deceiving me!” Sure enough, there was indeed a new chapter out! Holyyyyyy~! Thank youuuuuu! You are a blessing;-; I am blownnnnnnnn awayyyy!:D Dude, seriously, what an epic chapter! Especially the part where Hsi Wu made his grand re-appearance! And in the nick of time to! My feels were strong with this one! From Jade’s relief and happiness for his return, to Tohru decking a well-deserved punch to our former flighty (heh puns!) skydemon, to where everyone offered their Talismans to Jade for the final battle!(Too bad they’re of no use ;-; Jade is always so creative but the explanation made sense! You thought that through!:) ) Splendid writing! Of course I’m not surprised! With how freakin amazing this fic has been! But I will continue to praise your work because you really deserve every bit of it! I can’t waittttt to see the conclusion of this! I’ll be so happy(but also sad cause it will be over:( )but you say there is a epilogue AND possible bonus chapter?! Ahhhhh! *explodes* Please take your time! I don’t mind being patient especially for magnificent writing:3 P.s. the line “she’s not alone. She has me.” Got me all choked up. Hsi Wu has really come a long way! And it’s gonna be awesome to see him and Jade dish out some butt-whoop together! P.s.s Demon Jade must be quite the sight xD |
TheWhisperingWarrior chapter 24 . 6/1/2019 So great you're back to finish this story. Also love the new chapter and that Jade wasn't too upset with Hsi leaving in the last chapter. I so hope that when this is all over with that Jade's connection to Hsi from the Amulet of Eternal Skies and that transfer of chi just now made Jade permanently part sky demon. And that her form is similar to Hsi's like when Drago's changed when he absorbed the demon chi. If that's the case then she'll have her own wings and the two can share a leisurely carefree midnight flight together in the last chapter. Always wanted to see a sky demon Jade :) |
SuperGuest chapter 24 . 5/29/2019 I’ve kept this story bookmarked and I had nearly lost all hope since it had been awhile but I was totally psyched when I checked by chance and you had updated! This update was everything I could’ve hoped for! It was so great I can’t stop smiling! |
Randomuser chapter 23 . 5/28/2019 Holyyy~ I honestly don’t know what possessed me to rewatch Jackie Chan Adventures (nostalgia maybe?) or even attempt to find any fanfic but man I’m glad my curiosity got the best of me cause I’m so in love with this story. I was so immersed that I read it in one day and I was in total dismay when I couldn’t go to the next chapter. This story is amazing-from the fantastically creative plot(seriously you should’ve wrote the last season of JCA.) to the characters who you managed to keep IN perfect character. I even love Hsi-Wu’s development and how he couldn’t stop the changes in himself due to Jade’s friendship and her overall infectious personality. Which is why the last two chapters gripped me so fiercely! I was all over the place with my emotions! Wonderfully written! Seriously, your work is inspiring and I do hope you continue this! I read in your authors note that you were close to the end so I’m screaming internally cause I so badly want to see how this ends! Of course I know you have a life outside the internet and I do hope you are doing well! Please take your time! And if this be the last chapter then I still wanna thank you for putting it up and allowing me to bask in my nostalgia and also have me giddily pretend this is canon:3(because ohmygod it’s that amazing! You are a superb writer;-;) |
Victoria Taylor chapter 24 . 5/29/2019 I have enjoyed this story from the beginning and I am so happy that you have posted a new chapter. It has been awhile and it was such a good read! Things are getting really interesting and I can't wait to read more. |
Millenium Ring chapter 23 . 2/14/2019 This story is wonderful, why is it unfinished? Real life always gets in the way, I know this from personal experience. If you can find a way back to finishing this story, I am sure many of us will be pleased. What I've enjoyed about this story is the growing bond between Hsi Wu and Jade, in a strictly platonic manner. There aren't many people who dared to write friendship fics for the two characters. I love a good pairing story, but it's certainly refreshing to read something that truly fits with the characters so well: Jade considered Seymour a friend, not a romantic interest, because she was just a lonely kid looking for friendship. The second aspect of this story I'm enjoying is your ability to tie in the little stand alone plot holes we were left with from the series, to make one great story arc. Also, Daolon Wong just had to be the final baddie! He's so creepy and knowledgeable. If you ever go back to this, I'll be waiting! If not, then just know that I lived what I read and shall mentally continue this story to reach an end - even though I have no idea what will happen next. |
calvinator09 chapter 23 . 5/4/2018 I can't wait for the next chapter although wouldn't hsi wu's siblings tried to contact him by now |
Guest chapter 23 . 12/12/2017 Can't wait for more! It's just SO amazing! |