Reviews for Not Optimal
leenychops chapter 4 . 5/2
Oh, that was fantastic, thankyou
Samwise Pevensie chapter 4 . 6/24/2019
Love the fact that the ghosts made Tom more canny xx
HPandPJO4ever chapter 4 . 5/28/2019
This is really good! Please write more, even if it's only an epilogue!
annasfanfic chapter 4 . 4/2/2019
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annasfanfic chapter 3 . 4/2/2019
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annasfanfic chapter 2 . 4/2/2019
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annasfanfic chapter 1 . 4/2/2019
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Monster King chapter 4 . 1/7/2019
Great job
HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 4 . 12/5/2018
Well, he doesn’t seem so entirely changed as Scrooge was, but I guess things will be better overall than it would have been.
Xiaou Nem chapter 4 . 9/25/2018
Sounds interesting. I’d like to know what he actually makes out if this advice...
Tiffany Smithi chapter 4 . 8/23/2018
That was cool. So cool. I love how you did Gryffindor and Slytherin, but who was the other guy? Ravenclaw or Hufflepuff? Or something else entirely? (Yes, I know it was parallel to A Christmas Carol) just wondering.
ardvarkeating101 chapter 4 . 8/11/2018
D’awwww, he really does have a hear- vested self interest
Prince Pondincherry chapter 3 . 4/8/2017
Who in heaven thought Godric Gryffindor would be a good choice to help Tom Riddle not turn evil? Because that didn't work AT ALL!
Prince Pondincherry chapter 2 . 4/8/2017
This was awesome, and I really love your portrayal of Slytherin. Honestly, this may be the best possible explanation for Slytherin and his views.
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 2/18/2017
Excellent idea! She needed to tell him she loved him.
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