Pourquoi les meilleures histoires ne sont jamais terminées, c'est assez frustrant de se dire qu'on ne connaîtra probablement jamais la fin. Dommage

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

Love it but wouldnt hadrian have known about the wiziding world because he grew up there till he was 5 love hadrian nd tom clashes

I really like this story and can't wait for the next update.

I'm a bit confused on hadrian's mindset. It seems like he's very similar to Tom in his newness of the wizarding world. orphan or not, he was 5 when he was dropped at the orphanage, i feel that traditional and prideful purebloods would have exploited hadrian's apparent prowess to the maximum for the pride of their house. Tom just knows that he's special and has little intimacy with the wizarding world.

I want Tom to REALLY have to work to get Harry and mostly fail as he falls deeper in love with Harry. Too many stories have Harry giving in or falling for Tom or whoever else far too quickly (even if he denies it for a short while, it still counts if he fell for them) in these stories where he's awesome and determined to do his thing and never give in. Any physical interactions you have the two do I ask that Hadrian remain in control and indignant but otherwise unbothered by Tom's attention other than perhaps insulted and/or coldly amused. Like Tom sneaks/forces a kiss, Harry bites him hard enough to draw blood (which would be super painful). Or Tom trying to bodily pin Harry in some way in a intimidation seduction tactic always getting electrocuted, set on fire, or gaining frostbite. Just things like that. Tom is the one who's methods and ideals most likely needs to change so he's the one who should deal with the yearning and heartache and angsty shit of what it is he wants most. He's also the only one of the two who actually wants the other. Hadrian doesn't want him and for a long time there should be no reason for him too. It might be more interesting that Tom eventually changes tactics to ally himself with Hadrian for equal partnership first and after proving himself at least reliable tries to make the equal partnership have more than one meaning. Also I'm assuming that the mystery person is a relative or godfather of Harry's and will be of great help to his cause and getting rid of people like Dumbledore. The idea to wipe out all light magic users is a bit dumb tho if he's a believer of ALL magic.

THIS IS AWEOSME MAN IM SHAKING MY METAPHORICAL BOOTS WITH ANTICIPATION

Thanks for the update.

Glad to see you haven't abandoned this story. Btw, you should probably fix the spacing in the title and summary, a few times you forgot the space after periods and commas.

Super, I love this beautiful story.

TOM IS DOM

This is awesome!
I love this tension between Tom and Hadrian. I wonder who will top? I guess they'll switch, because they're both powerful and dominant in my opinion. Their fight for power is lovely portrayed. I'm excited about how they'll come to an agreement.
I really really like this fanfic, I hope you'll have time to update it someday considering it hasn't been updated for quite some time.
- chasingskeleton

Please update!

Hoooooyeeessss I am HOOKED

Oh i love it love it love it please update again soon