Ok, I know that this fic ends in 3 chapters so it almost certainly isn’t finished, and looking at the time that’s passed since the last update, probably won’t be. I’m commenting to tell you I don’t care. This is the best fic I have ever read on , and the best Smallville fic I’ve found from across the internet. I am so, so grateful that you wrote it and shared it with the world. From the bottom of my heart, thank you.

22 chapters in and loving this story. love
the changes you made to kryptonite and the eraditor look forward to seeing what happens next. I have fingers crossed on chole

James

;-; This was a great fic. Hope it ever updates.

DOH!

Book 3? Been 5 years :(

Is there going to be a sequel? Awesome story. Not so good ending if theres not going to be a sequel.

I love the original ideas you put in this story. Living kryptonite/kryptonium, ascension - highly creative. I hope you are still writing a third part.

That was not the way I saw things ending, that is for sure. I was kind of hoping for some kind of happy resolution.

Wow! I don't know what to say... the plot was fantastic and I really don't expect the 2nd book ending like that.

I saw it's been like two years since you posted the epilogue and you said you'll post the book 3 when it's completed, please, tell me you don't forget about this fic!.

There's a lot of things I want to know, p.e., there will be a 'superman'? You'll introduce some superman friends (lois and JL)? Kara is going to appear?...

I hope 3rd book will be complete soon :-D. Thanks for this great story.

Mawi

I honestly can only assume that since it has been two years since you posted this chapter that you have given up on this story. You DO realize that Clark isn't supposed to die, right? There are reasons why normal is considered good. The changing of the mechanics to kryptonite was quite fine, even well done. But there is another serious flaw with the story apart from the abismal ending:

Where the heck are the green lanterns? An entire galaxy that is quite advanced technologically isn't on their radar? You have to understand that it took a power as great as Darkseid and his Apokolips to stay the hands of the Green Lantern Corps. I very seriously doubt that the galactic body in this story can truly compare.

To be honest I didn't read any of the other reviews or your profile before posting this review, so I don't know if someone else has pointed out these flaws or whether or not you have left this story. Hopefully this story isn't over...

Woah! Amazing story! Chlark is such an awesome couple.

I hope you return to this story again soon, too much potential lost otherwise. And please don't let Clark die. :( He's the good guy who found love with his best friend. While I do understand some of Kal-El's motivations he must be stopped and the only one who can do this is Clark.

If clark dies I would not care...aslong as Kal-el was interesting and not completely 'I want to be a farm boy again'.

nice chapter.

Oh...Jon is fucked...lol

nice ending with fords manifesto...