I liked the tension between the two, especially in the first chapters.
I also liked some of the humor.

Well written. Thank you.

That was an awesome ending.
Way to stick it to him.

I've read this fic so many times... Well done! I laughted at the clichés about Paris. So, that's how strangers see the city? Just a little thing about the fourth chapter's tittle : the good way to write it is "Toi et moi".
One more time, very good job!

Can to the head perfection ;D AND I BUSTED OUT LAUGHING WHEN YOU SAID SASUKE'S HAIR WAS BLOWING ABOUT LIKE NOBODY'S BUSINESS HAHAHAHAH

OMG HAHAHHAA EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS CHAPTER WAS PERFECTTTTT LIKE YESSSSSSSS I WANT KIBA TO BE MY BEST FRIEND PLZZZZZZZ and how the hell did hinata get to the balcony next to them when they're meant to be on different floors? :O

Your the goddess of the writing of yaoi.

So good nice job

I've been reading your stories for a while and I always find them entertaining. But I wanted to give you a heads up in chapter 1 you state that naruto waved to his parents who were talking with the uchiha's, than in chapter 6 you state they light a candle for their lost families. otherwise I really enjoyed reading another of your fics.

I thought that was cute. :3

Coucou )
Your story is great, you write very well ! And I liked the growing feelings between Sasuke and Naruto ! I usually prefer when Sasuke is the dominant one but you managed to make me like it this way so Bravo !
You speak surprisingly well French, did you take some French classes?
Just to help you, and it's not really important but.. I don't know if you ever took a ferry, but it doesn't sway that much, it's very stable actually, difficult to feel sick in it (it's still possible, but your food tray doesn't sway very much)
Also, some errors with your French (very few, again, it's to help you, not annoy you, I'm constantly making error in English so it's only normal if you do some in French. Oh, and I'm French )
I will only correct the titles because I didn't take notes of all the mistakes you possibly made in the chapters, I was enjoying reading your fic' too much . Chapter three, there is a "s" à Restes avec moi.
Chapter four is "Toi et moi", we say, "Le Sacré Cœur" and that's all !
Again, I looooove your story ! Don't stop writing ! )

I believe you meant "Toi et Moi". No biggy, also, i love your stories in general and thank you for actually completing your works at a reasonable pace (even i can't say i do that).

Great. Amazing. Fantastic. This was a very awesome read. This might sound weird, but I felt the tension and excitement between them! Each chapter brought a better perspective of their love for one another. This was an attention getter! Keep it up :)

This was perfect! I loved it! Great plot that wasn't too fast, but it also didn't drag on! AWESOME!

Awww! This was such a cute fan fic! I really really loved it! XD especially when they start to touch each othet in public heehee!XD

I have gotten emails about Passion Fruit. Might check it out xD I like the couple so it should be something i'm interested in 0
I have loved this fanfic so so much! The plot made sense, had a nice build up and the lemon...hnngf, may have gotten a lady boner but we don't need to go into detail about that now ** lol