Fun, cute, and entertaining. A good one-shot

Love It.

So Emily is magical or a Squib? She could have magical children?

This could certainly be continued, he could go back after Voldemort was dealt with. He would want to have some break after all that wouldn't he?

Nice story, keep it up!

Most interesting idea. I wonder what Laurence would say if Emily ever started doing magic? XD

I liked what you did with Emily. Cheeky and clever.

this is nice.

That touched something within me (sorry about my english)

I love HP/Temeraire crossovers and this was an intriguing back story for Emily. How about sending Harry back there for good once he completes his task? He would love the dragons and the appreciation for warriors in the Corp. And I loved Harry's mental image of Jane as a warrior goddess.

Really it’s just too bad that your ending it here. It might have been interesting as a longer crossover, still, well done and good for you writing Tremere fics.

Great chapter and amazing story idea!

I wonder if harry will meet his descendants in his time period? but not bad...hope you try others like this.

This was good. I haven't read Temeraire but maybe I will now.

I like your story, cool job.