Awww that was so sweet!:-)

So beautiful. I loved it, even though my logical mind told me it couldn't be true, I wanted to believe because of how wonderfully you wrote it. You've made me a believer, Jack and Sam sneak away to have time together when they're off on missions. :)

Beautiful.

I could picture them in each other's arms, enjoying this rare chance to be together. Beautifully written story.

"Time kept going and the universe kept expanding and they couldn't be together."

O.o I LOVE that! The entire story is really beautifully written, but I really, really love this phrase.
Well done!

Nicely done. Enjoyed it!

Lovely :)

Lovely.

Great job. I can picture this. It would have been nice to see this on the show, but alas those damm frat regs always seemed to get in the way..