I just realized my name is Rose. Didn't mean for that to happen. I guess I'll change it to MelRose after this. Good chapter. Still dislike Martha.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Ohhhhh I never like Martha...

Forgot to put the name last time. Love this chapter.

This is the 3rd time I have read this story. Love. It.

I don't like how you wrote the family arc. Violet was interesting, but it seems to me like you're separating John Smith and the doctor too much. They're pretty similar though John Smith is more subdued than the Doctor. I don't think Rose would risk having the Doctor, not fully him or otherwise, like someone than that, so far, I've liked your rewrites of the episodes. This one didn't make me happy or satisfied, unfortunately. I have to thank you for writing Elliot though. He's a wonderful character and I'm really happy he got cured. If you'll excuse me however, I'm going off to read a family of blood with Rose actually being with the Doctor in his human persona. This episode wounded me.

where's donna? :'(

Oh lordy, there's another Mother Slap incomin', ain't there?

RORY :DDDD

And I already prefer this rewrite to the other one I found. It's great!

i missed the april fools day chapter... i was wondering if maybe if you still had a copy if you could just like make it it's own story or something...

Just want to point out, you made a mistake. The Fifth Doctor is NOT the fifth regeneration. He is the fourth regeneration. This is confirmed when he speaks to the First Doctor in "The Five Doctors". The Doctor did not regenerate into his original form AKA William Hartnell; he was born in that form. The actual first regeneration was the Second Doctor AKA Patrick Troughton, the second was the Third Doctor AKA Jon Pertwee, and so on and so fourth. It is a mistake, but don't worry, people make it the whole time.

It’s been a long time since I last binge-read a fanfic this long. But it was so worth it! I love the way you’re rewritten the storyline, I love that the characters are so themselves and I love your conclusion to it! You had me a bit worried there for a moment, but I LOVE the ending! Going to go look for more of your works now, I remember reading that Blink would be its own story. See you on the next one!

All I’ve done today is read this! I absolutely love it! Your writing is good and the plot is more than just re-writing the script, which I apreciate.
I especially love the ingenuity of this chapter. I’m sure I’m not the only one who wondered what Martha and the Doctor was up to when Sally Sparrow first stopped them, so thank you for giving us this backstory!

Just want to point out, you made a mistake. The Fifth Doctor is NOT the fifth regeneration. He is the fourth regeneration. This is confirmed when he speaks to the First Doctor in "The Five Doctors". The Doctor did not regenerate into his original form AKA William Hartnell; he was born in that form. The actual first regeneration was the Second Doctor AKA Patrick Troughton, the second was the Third Doctor AKA Jon Pertwee, and so on and so fourth. It is a mistake, but don't worry, people make it the whole time.