| Reviews for The Noble House of Black |
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   Purplestan chapter 17 . 3/3/2017 Honestly I have to say that this story really doesn't have a wow factor. It's a typical siruis black daughter fanfiction. The daughter goes to hogwarts having some type of boy best friend. Then she finds about siruis escaping and trying to hide he's her father. Then it goes onto the part in the shrieking shack basically following the film but the daughter really never wants anything to do with siruis while for siruis its the other way round. This is the storyline that the stereotypical siruis blak daughter stories follow. Honestly it's boring can anyone not come up with something a little different from that? Honestly I've read stories like yours before and they are just so plain and you can easily guess what happens. Sorry if this sounds rude but really to be a successful writer you need to take criticism on board. |
| Purplestan chapter 16 . 3/3/2017 Really losing faith in this story. For godsake stop changing the point of view if you want to write about how people are feeling write it in 3rd person instead of writing it in 1st and swapping from on character to another. I know this is only a fanfiction but if this was professional you wouldn't have the changing of points of view you would either have it in dirt person 2nd or 3rd the whole way through. But the way you are doing it is so off putting and makes the story worse. |
| Purplestan chapter 15 . 3/3/2017 You wrote "How dare you talk about James right in front of him!" And put remus said it but it was actually siruis who said that. |
| Purplestan chapter 4 . 3/3/2017 How can flint be a year older when oliver is in the 7th year. If he was a year older he shouldn't be in hogwarts. |
| Purplestan chapter 2 . 3/3/2017 You have some mistakes in this for example you put "when the light came back in." I think you meant on. Also you wrote "what are you " when I think you meant where are you. |
| Purplestan chapter 1 . 3/3/2017 Aw this is so sad. So siruis had a kid when he was 16? |
| Guest chapter 19 . 12/18/2015 Wow loved it maybe you should do a fanfiction about harry potter and draco malfoy |
| xXMizz Alec VolturiXx chapter 20 . 12/19/2013 I love both your stories about Rigel and Oliver! keep it up! |
| lia chapter 20 . 8/31/2013 I really liked this story) |
| TheDoctor'sAmazingCompanion chapter 19 . 5/14/2013 Brilliant! |
| Kimojuno chapter 19 . 5/10/2013 Lovely story; enjoyed it. :) |
| Kimojuno chapter 11 . 5/10/2013 Poor Rigel, nearly every one of the students distrusts her. :( |
| Amralume chapter 20 . 4/20/2013 Im a bit tired so keeping it short. You. Are. Brilliant. I loved every bit and but! Thank you :) |
| MuggleCreator chapter 19 . 2/1/2013 Wow. Nice stuff. Will be checking out the sequel now... |
| RockaRosalie chapter 19 . 1/12/2013 Good I look forward to the sequel |
