and honestly after all that yugi and yami deserve a happy ending i am sorry if i makes no sense i am writing while i am crying my eyes out

your story made me cry so much it hurt inside but it also was good as there was a happy ending somewhat

hi since your not going to write anymore yugioh stories i had to ask what was that last bit about did yami die or something or is he just away for a while i understand if you dont answer this but your story made me cry and not knowing what happened makes it hurt even more so if you could please clarify the last section of the epilogue it would be greatly appreciated

Heya! It's Digisaiyan Ash again.
I'm here to say this.
*YEAHOO! LET'S STAND UP FOR THESE RIGHTS! THEY WILL NOT TAKE AWAY OUR IMAGINATION FROM US! SUCK IT, SOPA! YOU WON'T WIN!*
Good story. Can't wait to read more.

Just call me Digisaiyan Ash. (No, I'm not a fanfic author so don't try looking for me)
THIS WAS MY FAVORITE CHAPTER OF ALL! I LOVE IT!
I also loved how Yugi got along with those four little girls. Can't wait to continue reading. Keep up the good work!

OMG I love this so much!

Oh my Ra. I cried at June 28th, June 2nd, June 6th, June 15th part two, June 18th and June 30th, But especially at June 28th. It's really a great story, and very detailed.

Your story was really sad that it made me cry twice and i was shaking with sadness but when yami and yugi became lovers, i was so happy for them, i truly am happy for yugi and yami! 0/0 but i feel sad for tea but when she found love i was also happy for her but not as much as i was happy for yugi and yami. Please make more stories they truly have an impact on me. the story taught me that no matter if you feel like no one will love you, someone will love you, and also the story taught me if the person you love hurts you, that forgive him/her no matter what.

This was perfect. A perfect little family and the fact that tea redeemed herself. Congratulations. I loved the triplets and Hikari and the scene with the kids. But just as a side note I don't think one years old can talk so much or interact so much with the world. But still it was cute

Ah this was cute and adorable. I am glad they are together now. I liked how Yami was there to calm yugi and then wake him up. Also the ending was nice. Funny.

I am sorry in the previous review I said that the story was over. Fanfiction on the phone acts up sometimes so it didn't show me there are more chapters there. I think it was really nice to include this song. I believe you and your friends really love working with music. I do too but I don't usually use the lyrics.
I also like the way you write. Neatly.

Mmm this story is marked as complete but I don't think this is the end. It's written long ago so I guess no update will come.
It was full of emotions and I wonder how close you are to sapphire wolf because I saw some of her original characters there. I guess you are all friends. I really liked the little girls because they were so full of life.
I really liked the story. I loved how seto and Mokuba were so close to Yugi. I loved how Bakura was protective of Yugi.
My only problem was how Yugi always cried. Nothing else. Even the suicide scene was right. It's just so hard to actually do it

can't wait to read the rest!

I just finished chapter 4, and I normally don't wrote reviews for stories that were finished more than a year ago, and never before I finish a completed one. But you wrote such an amazing, heart wrenching chapter as Yami was reading his diary. It was so well done, an it really made me feel the misery behind the words. I've enjoyed reading this so far, and I'm looking forward to finishing it as well. But I really felt the need to tell you what an amazing job you did on this chapter in particular. There aren't words that I feel can truly convey how well you did, and how much your talent showed, though I feel the tears cried during this chapter might be a good starting point.

I really enjoyed this story. I felt the journal entries was a great way to do flashbacks and the keep the story moving forward with the emotion between Yami and Yugi. I enjoy your writing style.