the most entertaning pjo fic ive ever read so far! great work! :)

I want to start off by saying that I absolutely love your fanfic so far.

when you talk about Hera's cabin though, you say pomegranates even though those are a symbol of the Underworld...

I'd love to see what the people on Olympus saw

It was a great story.

I like this story. This chapter was so well written

Evil Annabeth? Ah come on

I laughed a little to hard at the image of Roxanna just walking over and sitting in front of the furies like "sup."

I was hoping Annabeth would join. I'm not a fan of Damion.

I love Rox. I also love how you gave her a cool sword. stygian iron!

Hades is going to be pissed.

Ares war hounds duh

i did like this fic, it was something different to everything else I've read

I'm glad you are re-writing this story. I really liked it, but it definitely left room for improvement so I'm glad your going to redo it and give it another go. I was afraid for awhile you would simply abandon it. So I'm relieved you aren't. I just hope she doesn't get paired with Percy. That would be ridiculously predictable for an OC PJO character because most OC demigod girls in Fanfiction end up paired with Percy because not many people like Annabeth. So please pair her with someone other than Percy. They seem to have more of a sibling/best friend relationship anyway. But I digress, like I said I'm ecstatic you are redoing this story and I can't wait!

I really hope since you're rewriting the story, that you start posting the new version soon. I see Percy as more as a best friend to her nothing more, and Daimon also as a best friend/ first love. I think she should end up being with either Apollo or Hermes as the permanent pairing. I hope she's the prophecy child instead of Percy because then she could be offered in mortality in his stead and eventually get with either Apollo or Hermes because I'm not sure which one specifically she should be with, except I'm definitely sure she would be perfect with one of them. As far as her character, the only thing I have against her is how she's so eager to please everybody it seems. It doesn't seem realistic because of her parentage and her circumstances of upbringing. You would think with the life she had, she would be a bit more defensive and less trusting of others. When kids bully her at camp, she just pulls silly pranks but doesn't really stand up for herself and I find that unrealistic because with someone like her you would expect her to be a bit more defensive and have more backbone because of her circumstances of childhood. I also find how she views her father unrealistic. Yeah, She heard Her father was proud of her And she knew he couldn't directly contact her , But she still grow up lonely And it doesn't make sense to me That she would be so forgiving When she had such a miserable childhood all alone. Other than those things, I like the story very much And I can't wait till you start posting the new chapters For the rewritten Version. So please get to it as soon as possible Because it's been a while!

Can't wait!