TvTropes brought me here and I just had to see it for myself. And I gotta say, never thought that I would get to see Christian Grey get his ass handed to him so many times would bring a smile to anyone's face. Plus, it was confirmed that he was somehow living in his own universe despite what others claim. I had to admit, I'm more of a Bruce/Natasha, but that is minor. This is your story, you write it how you wanna write it. Just a heads up.

Now I wanna see like deleted scenes of Christian trying to seduce other women of MCU...Gamora, the Ancient One, the Valkyries of Asgard, Hel herself! Or perhaps...Death.

GASP...She-Venom and Deadpool! :D

This may be old news but you have *got* to check out James's latest turd, "Grey", which is 50 Shades from Christian's POV (there's a pdf at archive dot org). It is downright disturbing to the point where I forgot I wasn't reading one of the Christian POV chapters from this fic... in which he is a villain.

I had no idea that this fic isn't crack or even OOC at all. WTF.

Black widow really set up a false dilemma here with Ms. Waters. She and Hawkeye could have easily handed him over to the police and with their testimony as federal/international agents and Pepper's testimony, Grey would have been facing something more serious than an evening of discomfort.

Don't get me wrong I enjoyed it and found it hilarious but in the end, involving the cops would have led to more long term consequences for Mr. Grey and would not have ended up putting Jennifer in danger.

If you get the chance, how are these for ideas?
One shot ideas in case you want to indulge in catharsis
Grey vs The Pyms (Ant-mans gang steal his tower after Grey obsesses over Hope)
Grey vs The Ancient One (bit of a Karmic curb stomp)
Grey vs Wakanda (see above but with Vibranium enhanced antics)
Grey vs Gamora (Seriously, just leave him with the Guardians and it writes itself)
Grey vs Thanos (I genuinely don't want to think about what Grey would do with an Infinity Gauntlet)
You don't have to do any of them, its your fanfic. I just really loved reading it and can't believe its over.

I hope you see the irony in stopping Grey's stalking by having Hawkeye stalk her.

WTF Christian. Yeesh, this is insane. Yes, Pepper, call him out on his bullshit. I mean, he can't even fucking research anything about Pepper's job and what she does? I mean, what, is he going to expect her to quit Stark Industries too? Probably, honestly. God I can't wait for the Avenger ladies to beat his ass.

An interesting premise.

Reading pre-AoU fanfic after having watched AoU is uncomfortable because about 90% of them heavily ship Clintasha.

Looks like it ended up the other way around: SHE became obsessed with HIM.

Why butter him up and play submissive? Couldn't she simply say, "fine, you ungrateful brat", cripple him back and find another puppet if she needs one at all?

Why do you use. "Mister" instead of "Mr"?

I really do love Bucky. :)

Is that a reference to Spn?

Love this chapter. Bucky really giving it to Grey. Only thing missing from the list of crimes Grey will have to go to court for is the MURDER of a Shield agent! I know the guy wasn't a main character but murder is at least as serious as abduction, assault, and attempted rape.

? Wait. Isn't Grey a murderer right now? Didn't he snap some shield agent's neck at the hospital when going after Jane?
Chapter 22 quoted text: 'The lone agent had his back to Grey's side of the hallway and was watching earnestly for any sign of his returning comrades. His lack of attention was his death. A quick wrench of the agent's head produced a terrible popping sound as the man's neck gave and destroyed his spinal cord.'
Seems dead to me. Killing a federal agent (on camera?) with his bare hands (prints for sure!) while approaching a victim in protective custody seems pretty open shut to me. Shield now has huge leverage over Grey. Natasha (or someone) should be like: "Let's recap where we are right now, so that we are on the same page. You attacked a national asset three times, you killed one of our agents and are an accessory to attacking and kidnaping another. We are an international clandestine espionage organization. We don't patrol borders, we assassinate war lords and dictators and mad scientists. We give terrorists nightmares. We fight alien invasions, and we win. Up until this point we've been treating you with kid gloves. We dropped you off in the BDSM place for a taste of your own medicine because while you did assault and attempt to rape a friend, you haven't been a threat to national security. Now you are. You are a murderer and an enemy combatant. You are working with an alien attacking US federal agents on US soil. Thats treason Chris. Your fancy cloths? Gone. Fast cars, private jets, enjoying filet mignon on your yacht on the east coast? Finished. Your company's and property's? All the various national security agency's are going to make great use of an extra 2.2 billion dollars. Conjugal visits? That's a no. You are going to a dark hole in the ground in a prison that doesn't exist in a country you can't pronounce for the rest of your life. Your little sexcapade games? You will never have a whip or a candle or a feather or a bottom to spank for the rest of your time on earth. I'm going to personally make sure your hands are chained above your waiste so that you can't even touch yourself to the distant memories of your past life. That's your future if Shield can keep you to ourselves. We include the rest of the government and homeland security scientists will cut open your brain and install electrodes by the end of the week, nobody has had the chance to study someone healed and enhanced by Asgard 'magic' before. I'm sure I can convince the boys in the labs to castrate you while they are at it. No lawyer, no trial, no due process, no media attention, no bribing, no begging, and no mercy." Let him chew on that for a moment and then say: "This is your future. The only reason you aren't already on a transport to start your little trip, the only reason you have one tiny, desperate hope, is Agent Barton. If he is still alive, and we are able to rescue him thanks to information you provide, then we just might have some... flexibility with your travel itinerary." He's going to be so busy trying to negotiate to keep a portion of his company and a chance at freedom (perhaps a sanitarium here in the states instead of a pit in Cuba) he's not going to pull some charity ball bs.

So when Natasha says: "...I knew you were a rapist, an abuser, and a manipulator of the lowest denominator, but I didn't take you for a murderer." She is just forgetting about the life of this junior agent! This needs editing. Either change it so the agent was knocked out or have someone explain to Grey that he is screwed and needs to start cooperating. No matter how rich you are when you kill a cop (or any type of law enforcement) and go up against the CIA for super heroes things get real.

Love seeing Squirl girl!