I kinda want to know about the Sierra of this world...

I cannot help but picture the Louise getting a crush on macho Kirche simply because shes doesn't recognize her in the disguise.

I picture Blitzhart as Saxton Hale from team fortress 2.

She really does have a bear carpet thats to scared to move... Karin of the Heavy wind is basically the Chuck Norris of this world now, I LOVE that.

There are times when the eye skips over sentences, this has the amusing side effect of misinterpretation, such as implying Cattleya is a lesbian being discovered in the act by her little sister, which I would have found much more amusing then Cattleya being a vampire, on the other hand it does not rule out the hot lesbian sex.

These statements about the towers sound remarkably like euphemisms for genitalia, I find this highly amusing.

This sounds awesome, instead of one mediocre human, she gets an entire horde of minions all of whom have the power of gandalfr.

Aluminium, while not combustible, has a melting point of 660C. which is much lower than iron at 1538C. Not sure how hot a dragon fires but this could be a massive problem. However what you expect from an organization that fires all its experts.

Finally caught up with the story and finished overlord 2.
I quite enjoyed the Masterful commentary that are, at the same time, hilarious.
Just a thought but overlord would be little more than a bandit lord, if you go by the gameplay. the Overlord in the second game went up against an "empire" whose capital garrison was a couple hundred men. "towns" in that world had population of ... 100.
If halkeginia is a bit like renaissance Europe than the population would be so much larger that overlord would not hope to affect it meaningfully. Brussels, for instance, had population of 50,000, and medieval armies frequently had thousands of men.
An overlord could field several hundred minions, even if command cap is removed. That's more of a band lord than an existential crisis.

I love all the classical references. Words cannot begin to describe how much I hope you start updating this again.

"Saint Pyrene of Pompeia". I cannot understate how much I love and appreciate this.

This honestly is one of the few stories that has captured the spirit of the Overlord franchise. The cliche subversion Louise is forced to endure due to the image of evil woman in charge is icing on the cake. The inclusion of unique Minions was another welcome change that I'm happy to see.

Honestly I would love to see an actual anime adaptation following this narrative.

After a long and arduous journey, I have finally found the perfect artifact, truly a shame no more of these ones are to be found.

Sorry reviewed as guest the other day by accident. Forgot to add that the brexit stuff is hilarious!
I got some weird looks whilst delivering post (I listen to fanfiction with a screen reader) as I was laughing out loud!
Arion

Oh my wow. Just read your story over the past couple of days and this was amazing!
Professional quality writing and a story that I would have happily paid for from a shop.
Intrigue, plot and cute stabby stabby minions!
I can't wait to read more!
Many thanks for all of it so far!
Arion