| Reviews for Cold Revenge |
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your kidney 4lunch '3 chapter 8 . 7/24 Why did I torture myself by clicking this knowing it probably wont ever be finished |
TheWeepingTurtle chapter 8 . 12/27/2019 Oh Tony, the ever witty one. Nice story! |
Reading-Stories-Only chapter 8 . 5/12/2019 I understand your life may have moved on from this fic, but if you ever want to update I would be grateful. This is seriously good. |
Derpidot chapter 8 . 4/1/2019 This is amazing! Too bad no more updates, this has so much potential |
Guest chapter 8 . 12/11/2018 Kudos on the interesting premise, bringing in Obi wan would give an interesting perspective on the marvel universe. His skill set makes him diverse enough to really add some as a hero. Unfortunately the execution is flawed. The biggest problem here is Riley, the fixation on her takes away from Obi Wan's presents. So far she's: wise beyond her years, builds advanced technology out some spare parts, has a secret hideout she built herself is Hawkeye's niece, is an orphan looking for her parents killer, and becoming Obi Wan's apprentice. There's pretty much no negative to her character and becomes quite boring to read. |
LONE RANGER 97 chapter 6 . 11/26/2018 Okay seriously what was the point on saying Loki was Anakin's father? That was a serious question by the way. |
LONE RANGER 97 chapter 5 . 11/25/2018 Does Thor ever find out that he has a nephew that was killed? |
BlueLanternRazor chapter 8 . 8/16/2018 I've been reading and re-reading this story for three days now! I love it so much, (I'm still hyped for both Inifinity war part 2, and clone wars season 7) Obi-Wan is his usual awesome self in this, and Riley is the spunky sidekick/padawan he never knew he needed. Seriously, you've done an awesome job on this story and I need more! |
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 8 . 5/10/2018 Riley is a trooper |
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 7 . 5/10/2018 Loved the braiding |
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 4 . 5/9/2018 Madatory meetings are the worst |
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 3 . 5/9/2018 I am curious about Riley |
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 1 . 5/9/2018 Interesting making Loki the father |
Sylphrena33 chapter 8 . 3/2/2018 This is great. I really like this story, and I'm excited to see where it goes. I like Riley a lot too, and that she's Obi-Wan's padawan. Great OC. I'm really enjoying this, can't wait for the next chapter. :) |
Guest chapter 8 . 10/16/2017 This is awesome! Keep up the excellent work. Kudos |