I enjoyed it, especially how humans were introduced to the rest of the universe. The fleshback and forth was a little confusing at times. Most of them worked well except in one or two places so they did not stop me from enjoying the story. Keep up the good work.

I liked this, I really did. Though there were bits where the grammar and puncuation were wrong, I got past it well enough to enjoy the story. If you haven't posted on already, I suggest a sequel. Your view on how their peoples meet was actually pretty ingenius.

A plot line I might implement myself, though slightly different to avoid copying you. Either way this was a delight for me. I plan on seeing what else you're hiding from me.

Blue

So beautiful and such a wonderous plot, I love that you involved your own ideas on turian biology. There needs to be more stories like this!

I really liked your story and thought that your changes to the ME universe worked well. I caught a few spelling and grammar errors here and there, but overall, well written and thought out. Bravo.

I give you two thumbs up! ;)