This is the best story I have ever read, but there hasn’t been a new chapter in months. When is the next chapter going to come out?

To the dude who likes to leave flaming reviews that are quite a bit harsh. Navarone doesn't NEED to forgive anyone his “friends “ hurt him and abuse his trust to the point he doesn’t trust anymore. Who cares if they want to be forgiven I’m sure some murders want to be forgiven as well, but the fact remains whatever action was taken was taken and he is well within rights to treat it however he wants to. Navarone is the victim and he’s right to be angry and hurt and well within his rights to never forgive his once again “friends” but obviously he’s probably going to if you haven’t been reading these most recent chapters with his whole forgiveness ark. I think everybody who did him wrong and continue to do him wrong by saying it’s what they think is best for him can want for forgiveness all their lives. I love this work more than anything I’ve ever read and coming back to check on it just to see people smashing the writer and how they writ story is just downright wrong too much time and effort has gone into this for people like that to find a quick read and roast it then leave I hope the author will see this and I want them to know that I’ve followed this story for years and if you continue I’ll keep following for years to come. I hope you write something and become a genuine author who nobody can wait for the next book because that’s how I feel about every chapter. I wish you only high fortune from here.

The story went off on a good start, he went into Equestria, found out shit doesn't look as pastel coloured as it is, and then became an actual hardened veteran along the way. The highs and lows of his life was honestly amazing, and one pinprick this far that I can complain about is how the rape scene with Kat isn't detailed day by day, if it is going to affect him this far.

It was good.

Was.

Then it spirals to a pot boiling display of psychopathic spite.

This anti-prank thing Navarone did is just being exceptionally spiteful and rude. He had been screwing over them times and times again, for something they had been apologizing over and over now, without giving them the chance to redeem themselves even once. Even with the lot of his amusing journey and sex life, I cannot press on to read and internally support the actions of this one psychopatic unforgiving motherfucker. I am dropping this fanfic's sad excuse of an evil sapient liquid diarrhea shit.

Must he screw the two of them over and over for something that they show full honest remorse of? I just can't push on, the story's gone really bad and overbearing with how much of a jerk Navarone is, way past the point of humorous, character developement, and seriousness, into the barren territory of pure spite. I hope the parts I didn't read from now on was about him getting raped and tortured until he broke, because for all I care, I don't care anymore for this pathetic piece of spiteful protagonist.

I like it that Taya finally start to speak up more and being more apprehensive. Also, Flo seems like a nice person, really.

That explanation on Changeling society structure's effect on crimes and such reminds me of the book 1984.

Intelligentsia Inner Party
Sapients Outer Party
Drones Proles (except the drones really are unintelligent)

Being a mare of sexchange left on edge for 5 hours on a fuckmachine thing while ballgagged is exactly my fetish though, damn.

I fucking LOOOOOVE that crown outburst HAHAHA!

So Stalliongrad does appear and exist here! What's next, Vesalopolis? Our Town? Olenia?

Jesus H motherfucking Christ this had gone dark as shit, and then went all to fast back to normal. Nothing ununderstandeable though.

I really wished you would've used the actual equestria map instead of "our Earth". It should be far more fun to make war out of peaceful lands.

Overall, I'm fucking hooked on this shit. Kudos for this actually engaging story of war, peace, and love. Am not a fan of mlp but any means, but the Equestria at War mod for Hearts of Iron 4 really do made interest light up inside me.

Can you please update i love this story and i want to see how nav kills discord

This is just my opinion and I don't expect you to respond or acknowledge this, and I might come to regret posting this but YOLO, fuck it, whatever.

I really wanted to like everything in this story, goddammit I really do. The times where it was just an awesome experience was your world building alone and detailed violence and unpredictable direction at times of major shifts in some segments. But all of this crap with relationships and friendships and wanting to change and stuff the ever living crap into Nav is just so forced, I can't helped but ask what the direction is for her besides shagging them to shut the hell up. Besides his crazy adventures that puts her under pressure and forcing him to plan and improvise, you know whenever it's flight or fight mode, the time you make with her sitting on her ass just seems time consuming. Not to say it isn't important to give the mc a break, but with the interruptions from Fleur, Twilight, Doppel, Taya, and the others who screws or want to screw her there just doesn't seem to be one moment where you can focus on smaller casts and worry about adding them in later. Do they just all have to be so overbearing and attention seeking whorses? Christ on a Star of David.

And I'm curious: why do you abuse Nav with so many asshole-ish characters? I mean I just can't like any of the people, and I can only pity the MC so much until he literally begs for 'punishments' and other kinky crap - where is this going from here cause it dragging for a long freaking time now? I don't see why you make Nav go so far off the deep end with suicide or depression unless you're making the common theme mundane or lightly humorous in the first place. He's been heavily targeted and hurt and used up that it just seems like that's the only thing I see from her. This along with the sex just feels repetitive at this point and unnecessary to add into the plot - most of the time it's like filler to me that's near equivalent to steven universe episodes. Mentioning kinky sex and spankings or being used and all that shit, and just pushing for more abuse is just too much at times. I thought it would take an interesting turn after getting impaled and hospitalized by that whats-his-name, and making him do something else besides fucking or at least a little less of it. It did, but the sex scenes and getting dommed over and over again doesn't help develop the character.

I just can't wrap my head around her logic to just keep on along with her friends crap. The only time I finally get to see some sense of self awareness and trying to improve for herself other than for others was when you made her into a drunken mess who lost all inhibitions and expresses all of the things she hates. Being watched, being a woman, wearing dresses, the whole works that externally shifts her overall characters. I thought that breaking point would give him more direction with his doubts against Flo and maybe have a serious discussion, and it just gets stalled and keeled over by Gourd and the other just OVER caring about her like she's always vulnerable, when sometimes you make her do it to get sex as the tradeoff.

It just feels slow, I don't know if its because of your massive cast of characters or just because you like the make the direction revolve back to fucking in some occasions. Whatever it is, I can't seem to point it - could be just because I don't like how its paced.

That's the general gist of it, I think I have other things in mind, but those are the ones I'm currently mulling over. But don't let this stop whatever you're doing with this fic, I'm just the idiot who actively searches for cartoony fics with Mature only filters. I pretty much asked for this. This fic is a different thing altogether compared to many others, so I'm still going to read it and know I'll see something interesting. Besides my out-of-the-blue post, I have no regrets reading this and hope to see you continue and keep me off guard. I mean no harm nor ask you to change anything, I just wanted to write this out

i really liked the initial progression of story for the first 60 chapters, and the world you describe is awesome in detail. but after a hundred chapters the slutty aspect of navarone and the repetition of friendship and the on and off relationship status (both the fucking them and being friends at the same time, honestly just call them fuck buddies - poor fluttershy) with the whole elements of harmony is kinda overplayed at this point. there seems to be this pattern of him acting like a dick, trying to make up for, him being a ratchet ass ho, spanking ensues, domming his ass, and flo just smacking his shit up every time he makes some typical sexual remark (none in concrete order). its almost like that in every chapter. is that intended filler at this point? hell, i dont even think nav or the other crew learned jack besides being more perverted to the protag. and theres just so many characters to look out for that their importance just feels like theyre fading. but the main reason i trudge through it and skim through the sex scenes is cause i enjoy the broad and morbid topics and niches you like to bring to the mlp world - it brings an interesting perspective and makes the events more unpredictable. great sense of humor and the journeys without the sex alone makes it worth it to bookmark. well this chapters my stopping point and ill take a long break til i come back cause i do want to see how this will turn out after so much bestiality, rape, drugs, genderbending, pseudo-incest, and many other disturbing trends in this fic. and heres hoping i get to see more interesting characters and insane bs events thatll drag everyone into some more bs and maybe get used to the idea of nav staying as a woman permanently. peace out dude and keep it up - your writing is definitely something else

Love this story and am genuinely awed at the level of commitment and creativity that you have. So please continue the story

Started reading this fic roughly around November 2019. Finally caught up to your most recent chapter! Amazing story keep it up!

What is planned at the end of the story?