A lovely piece. You should write a squeal if you have not already. Thank you for sharing it.
Lot of Love,
Devilsangelsaphire

Make more! It's so good!

Personally, I would loooove a sequel, if not one already. This was amazing.

This was a adorable!

I absolutely LOVE this fic! You did such an amazing job capturing both Connor's and Achilles' personalities! This was extremely well written, wonderful job!

whoaaa, so good oh my god! please continue this :)

I really enjoyed reading this! Hope you write more involving Alice and Connor :DDD

Much love!

this was nice.
i enjoy your writing style and i love how you took your time to set the base for Connor and Alice's relation. the only thing that bugs me is how "out of nowhere" the love scene seemed but it was pretty easy to overlook as the whole was extremely nice to read.
i do hope you plan on writing other stuff with these two.

Good job! Sequel please.

Interesting, a little bit more description for Alice might be in order though.