I absolutely loved this story! I feel like the mood and themes stayed so true to the movie. It made such a perfect sequel I felt as if I was watching the movie in my head. I'm always just such a sucker for happy endings. Loved it, loved it! Keep up the great writing.

very good

So... the night mare Helen jumped into didn't just change from dark to light, it also changed from a girl to a boy? A mare is a girl horse, and a stallion is a boy horse.

ADFGHJKL I love it. I love how you didn't mix up the stories with too much romance, a little is enough. Keep up the good work!

You pulled it off really really beautifully...
It was a little confusing at first, but it went greatly till the end.

Superb, awesome, midblowing, worderfully done. I have added your fanfic to my favs.
Thankd for sharing your amazing fanfic with us and Keep up the good work!

Spread the Happiness by Oh, Hush! Feat. Hannah Ashbrook started playing and I find that really creepy with this ending.

I friggin LOVE this chapter, it's perfect! Fatherly Pitch FTW

I'M CRYING

Finally a realistic Jack! Um, sorta. I mean, 300 years is a long time.. I've always found it kinda weird when fanfiction-Jack falls in love with a 21st century person and goes all like, "I've never felt this way for anyone before," etc etc. Nah, THIS makes a lot more sense.

Why would the man and woman /smile/ at each other upon finding a baby abandoned on their doorstep? I mean, the normal reaction is to freak out, maybe call the cops or something, right?

Other than that, so far so good..

I know that this is late, but I just had to say this. The names of the kids in Japan, Tang Miwa and Shen(?) Yoshi, from chapter 12, are from TMNT... Pretty slick how you slipped those in.

Nice story.

Hairy wings? GROSS!

Well, lets see how this goes.

You mentioned him killing his wife, why doesn't Helen care about that?

Destiny is what you make of it.