| Reviews for The Hands of Fate |
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blacksbear chapter 12 . 10/22/2019 I’m interested in seeing where this goes! |
Mattelle chapter 3 . 8/25/2019 i love the boys" banter. its fun |
TheDolphinAnimagus chapter 12 . 7/9/2019 Love this story! You have portrayed Snape so well! And I love that Hermione is James sister. Love the parents! Hope they don’t die! Can’t wait to read more! |
ANGSWIN chapter 12 . 7/6/2019 I love a good time-travelling Hermione story. :) This is an intriguing one...and I look forward to reading more! |
Padfoot'smyMan chapter 12 . 6/29/2019 I am glad to see you back. I hope that you keep us updated as you write very well. |
FlowerChild23 chapter 12 . 6/28/2019 aww. so sweet but so sad. |
Mattelle chapter 12 . 6/27/2019 I really like this story and would like to see more. I really like James being so worried about Mione. Very older brother. I should know, I have two and if they think something's wrong with me they get worried. I hope you update more than once a year. |
Bren Gail chapter 1 . 6/27/2019 Marvelous introductory chapter. I thought the summarization of canon events flowed nicely into the story to move it forward. The Hands of Fate premise is brilliant. |
Guest chapter 12 . 6/26/2019 Wow, I had no idea ‘Tuck Everlasting’ came out in 1975! I bought it at a school book fair in the nineties and just assumed it came out around then...and as meaningful as ‘Night’ is, I think ignorant purebloods like Regulus Black would benefit most from reading it. It’s not like Severus doesn’t realize that muggle-borns aren’t subhuman like blood purists do...but I really enjoyed how you wrote Severus this chapter! I feel like it’s hard to write him light-hearted without him coming off as OOC, but you totally nailed it! This part made me snort out loud! ‘Severus refused a new sweater, but Hermione was adamant. "Whatever I don't spend, James inherits." A slow grin spread across his face.’ I do wish there was something Hermione could do for his home life. Maybe she could come up with a curse that makes any injury Tobias inflicts on his wife and son appear on himself too? |
hyperchick368 chapter 11 . 11/20/2018 Do you need a beta? I noticed several spelling mistakes. As well as an odd sentence 'with his eyes still closed, he smiled and looked at his wounded hand' I love the story though and cant wait to read the next chapter |
Guest chapter 11 . 10/25/2018 I’m glad you updated again and hope you find time to do it again |
vrzsk chapter 11 . 9/11/2018 This is amazing! I read this story in one go, couldn’t stop reading it. Please update it as soon as you can! You’re a brilliant writer. |
sunshine.katz chapter 11 . 9/6/2018 Great chapter - thanks for the update! I vote to keep Charlus and Dorea - I like their backstory, particularly Dorea's :) |
Ballet Dancer chapter 11 . 8/31/2018 Great chapter, can’t wait for the next one |
Gemma chapter 11 . 8/28/2018 Hi! I think because you have made this story AU and you have come this far that it would be best to leave as is. Unless you make Euphemia a distant Black or a Crabbe (Walburga's maternal side of the family). I kindof shiver at the thought of Harry being related to Crabbe tho... Love the story! Can't wait for your next update! |