Fav and follow. :)

Hello again :)

Good to see you back, I thought you'd given up on this.
The ending is a bit too sudden, chapter 4 had better pacing, but overall, it's fine :) I kind of expected a longer dialogue between Allen and the Earl.

Thanks for the read.

Update plz!

i love ur story pls pls pls continue it i really really want to see wat happens to allen i want to know if he remember anything about the black order and seriously the needs to be more allenxlenalee stories around here there r way too little

This is a good story. Please continue. Allen and Lenalee forever.

O-o WHAT THE GOOBER?! That's all... Though hopefully all my questions will be solved soon...

So sorry, I was too lazy to log in:)
Really, really like your story. It still got lots of grammar mistakes but i LOVE IT! The story finally gains speed, although Lenalee's expressions on the first chapters were a bit confusing. Will be waaiiiting X)

very interesting that I want to see the rest
that will be the death of the father of allen has to do with lenalee
dammit to very curious to know then not to write
why has no way to know the rest
I am very curious to know right continues

continua quero saber o que vai acontecer sera que o allen vai
conseguir se lembra !
e a lenalee vai ajudar ele !
continua esta muito legal
não para de escrever por favor por favor !1

update please!

This was good :)
Though I'm not goin to lie that it was a little fast moving/confusing/random (in my oppinion). But it was still good. I'm not saying that it was bad, it was just really jumpy and I wasn't able to keep up with why was happening. Anywho, I can't wait to read what happenes next :)

Wow... Unexpected... But good :)

Too short... Your author note is longer then the actual story lol. The average amount per chapter should be atleast 1000 words if you want your story to grab attention. It's hard to develope an opinion when there's such little material presented. Make it longer

Great stuff

continua quero saber o vai acontecer