ok so maybe my sleep addled mind is missing the sequel (as there must be a sequel to this awesome story). Could you please point me in the appropriate direction?

Oh wow that last line.

really love this story! hope there is another update soon!

Any updates for this story?

I hope that Regina will be all right.

I am completely, irrevocably in love with this fiction. It is tearing my heart to pieces. You are a wonderful and yet horrible human being with so much talent. I am so excited for the next installment, please update soon. Did I mention you were a beautiful human being? I love you darling! Keep writing these amazing fictions! YOU ROCK!

xoxo- P

So glad this is far from over :) I'm glad they worked out the whole I was hired to kill you thing ;)

Interesting twist.

Your formatting is off. Centering makes it look like poetry. Justifying makes it look like a story. Just sayin'.

I LOVE the noir trope your using. It's awesome.

There are technical issues.
First, I don't think Emma would have put the pistol in her waistband right after the shooting. If she's a punk, she'd have run with it in her hand or dumped it is the trash to get rid of the evidence. If (to use the noir parlance) she's a private dick, she'd have a holster.
Second, no one carries ether unless they're out to kidnap someone. They'd use a blackjack (probably called a 'sap'). Your setup indicates a coincidental snatch.
Third, no mafia officer would call their hitter a hitman. Even if they would, Regina wouldn't. It's gauche. She'd probably call him an employee or just 'best men'. Anything else admits guilt. It's a good habit to stay out of.
The last is a language technicality. I really noticed it in the last paragraph. Any time a new person speaks, give them a paragraph. Yes, it takes up space on a page, but it cuts down on confusion. Your last paragraph was pretty rough.
All that said, MOAR PLZ! As I've said, I love the concept. I wouldn't have criticized if not invited. No one can play a concerto on the first go. Your idea is awesome. Please continue.

Great chapter also Im so glad theres another chapter :D

Awww they're going out on a date and I'm glad Regina said yes.

Yay! An update. Enjoying the story. Was about to cross this one off the list of stories I read. Thank you so much

Wonderful! I love that Regina 'tells' Danny that she found her lady love. :)

God, thank you for this great update! I had wait so hard for this update, but it is worth it!
And the call from the one men, thet he have won this...awesome!
hope to read more soon! :)

Is this story going to continue?