You continue the story, i'm like story.
I want to know if the you,Amazing story

This is great. Cant wait for the next chapter. I'm looking forward to there reunion. These two make an adorable couple.

Moar boar demands moar.

Ya, without Liara, Sh

Hope your mom is doing better. Great job on the chapter.

Great stuff. Could be better if Freeman was flushed out the airlock. Lol Just sayin. Don't like Freeman or Kaiden. Looking forward to Liara. Totally in love with the Blue Angel :-D

Just wanted you to know that I love your stuff.
Really.

Great work. Love this part where Grunt get born so to speak.

Can't say I'm not a bit relieved to have Charles off and away. he was frustrating, even if he served a purpose :P
Honestly, who in their right mind would see Rae at home with kids, in Florida, while Charles brought home the bacon. I mean...is it possible? Sure, but not likely. Not with her from what I've read.

Ug... What a place for me to catch up.
I can only hope that your faced paced story will resolve this, cause it's pissing me off.
Still, I like what you've done so far. The Charles twist was good, and I'm wondering if you're going to get Rae and Liara together before the next installment because that was one thing I never liked about the game.
Good luck with your writing!

Outf**kingstanding kicked his ass off the ship. Absolutely awesome. He should have been blown out the airlock. But this will do, for now. Shepherd so needs Liara. She'll never be whole without her. Great job.

Been catching up all week on your series, been enjoying it a lot. Not been leaving any feedback on your closed stories but with this one in progress thought it was time. Have to say I've hated Charles from the start. He seems to be a guy that don't understand when a woman says bmp no, it means no. And now, I think he's the kind that has to be in control of any relationship. And even if in control he'll be a abuser. This is a character that'll make anyone involved with him look like a victim.

Ha great job. Put'em in their place Shepherd hell ya.

Great chapter. So love your story. Sad about Liara.

Nice covering of Kasumi's mission. I can see why she destroyed the greybox too...it's probably for the best in the long run, but it wouldn't kill the immediate hurt Kasumi will have.

Good work! Looking forward to more!