| Reviews for The Girl who Imprinted |
|---|
TheDragonPrince99 chapter 16 . 6/13 This story is so good, it's a shame it was never finished. One of the top Hp/ Twilight xovers and wasn't even slash. |
Guest chapter 16 . 4/28 I know this story was last updated a while ago but I've just read it and it is very awesome! I love the detail and the writing and the whole story is so engaging! Don't know if you will ever go back to this but I would be very happy if you did. Well done. |
Kingofclubs8129 chapter 16 . 4/13 I wanted Seth to imprint on Ginny. Also I ship courtney with Leah and Harry |
koseta.a chapter 11 . 3/7 Your Amelia is so ooc I have whiplash. |
ShadowFireZelda chapter 13 . 2/29 Sooo... I get that it was kind of played up for humor, but if someone showed up at my house with no warning and told me that we had plans now... they'd get a door slammed in their face. I had shit I was doing and no one even asked me. Important my ass. lol |
The Herb chapter 16 . 12/29/2019 I followed this story when it first came out, and utterly loved the writing and portrayal of characters within. The interaction between Harry and Leah adds a personal layer to them, the Imprints add a bit of awkward perspection, how Hermione interacts with Ginny and Draco treats the world adds a layer of humor to the story. This story was incredibly well written and the idea that it has been abandoned is heart wrenching. It is a sincere hope to see this story be picked up and continued. |
Guest chapter 15 . 11/12/2019 Why tf is Harry getting weaker by each chapter? |
Gensplejs chapter 16 . 6/13/2019 UPDATE! |
Gensplejs chapter 16 . 6/13/2019 update! |
Outgund chapter 16 . 5/2/2019 Brilliant story, was laughing the whole way through. Your portrayal of draco was inspired. Loved it hope you pick it up again. |
Outgund chapter 4 . 5/1/2019 I'm DYING! Draco at McDonald's lmfao |
xenoblubber chapter 6 . 3/28/2019 I know this story of yours isn't really thought out, but this is just next level bad. The interactions between characters was already awkward, with the characters just seeming to show up at random times with no thought given to what they really should be doing in their normal lives and jobs. But this newest chapter makes the whole story seem like a joke. Are you trying to make the story seem like a stereotypical, bad reality-TV show? Because that is really how this chapter comes off. |
xenoblubber chapter 1 . 3/28/2019 Couldn't finish the story, got to chapter 6, but the plot of this story is just so amazingly shallow that most of what happens doesn't even make sense if you really think about it. It all just feels so forced, and most of it is, because the plot isn't thought out enough for things to happen naturally and logically. A lot of the characters also feel off to me, I can't explain this one really, just that characters that I normally like are really annoying in this story. |
Wika0304 chapter 16 . 1/24/2019 please update, it's great |
Shalk Zailackar chapter 16 . 1/4/2019 Excellent story! I kept reading and reading until I got the end of this chapter. I was actually so engrossed in the story that I didn't even notice that this was the last chapter. I really enjoyed reading this story to the point where I have pretty much been reading it without feeling a need to take a break. Thanks for the great story and all the time you put into it. Below are some of my thoughts about the story... I am definitely glad that Leah and Harry finally got to have sex with each other. You definitely do a very good job writing erotic material. I actually got turned on a few times while reading some of the interactions the two have had throughout the story. One of the aspects I enjoy the most is your characterizations and how far beyond silly you make some of the characters act. I especially appreciate how idiotic the thought patterns of Draco are. From some of the comments, you have made I kind of wonder if being around Harry is making Leah more magical. It would be funny if the thoughts that Draco has of Leah being a witch turns out to come to be true in the future. One of the things that make me think that are the times when Leah and Harry seem to share an unusually strong connection. I remember a couple times in the fight against the vampires that they seemed to almost read each other's minds and come to sync. I also recall later on that Leah commented to herself on how fast she was healed compared to the effectiveness she had seen on other people. She blamed the bound but I suspect it is because she has been sucking magic into her body. Another hint was when they went to Alaska and Harry was preparing to cast Fiendfyre. As Harry started gathering his magic she mentioned that she felt the magic in the air to the point of feeling as if she would see the magic as |