i actually thought it was awesome. you should totally do more!

I liked it, and I think you got into 2D's mind well. :) I think you got into Murdoc's mind too in your other story :)

Very interesting,
Keep up the good work :)

Personally, I thought that this was really, really good. It was very well written, with few grammatical errors, and I like how you dived into 2D's thoughts for a bit. And I really can see him doing something like this, as he'd naturally desire some form of freedom after a while. It felt a lot like an actual story that 2D himself would tell in Rise of the Ogre or something. It's a little hard to explain, but that's just the vibe I got from this. Anyway, you really need to give yourself more credit, because this was very enjoyable. Great job. :)

Heh, nice! I like this, it's interesting and everyone seems in character. Poor 2D, that can't be healthy for his mind.