I'm new to this story and got hooked immediately. I love love love the personalities you've given to each character, the setting, the emotional issues everything is perfect! Please keep updating!

I feel like you somehow knew it was my birthday and made this wonderful present for me. Honestly I was content just having what you had already written but I liked this. And it's 3 am and I don't know what else to say right now because I was planning to go to sleep when I noticed I liked it, and thank you.

I have practically waited for this chapter for my whole teen life, and it feels incredibly authentic to be lying here once more in the dark of the night and the warmth of my bed on the same old blackberry curve, reading this chapter like the 13 year old perv I was. This honestly felt amazing. I've read this fic too many times to count tbh. Keep it up! (Though I'm 16 now this still touches me like it did when I was 12/13 I'm honestly so happy)

OH MY GOD YOU'RE HORRIBLE. )': I JUST SAT HERE CRYING FOR A GOOD TEN OR FIFTEEN MINUTES BECAUSE OF EVERYTHING. THAT'S /NOT/ OKAY! -pouts- HOW COULD YOU DO THAT?!

For reals though... I really did cry for ten or fifteen minutes. Put me in a funeral setting and I guarantee I will cry, even if I didn't know the person. Except in this case, I felt like I DID know Demyx... I felt connected to him, they way I feel connected to the rest of the characters... As it is right now, I'm currently sitting with a kleenex stuffed in both of my nostrils to stop the snot from running down my face like what happens when I'm really really crying.

...You're not horrible though. That was actually a surprise twist that I'm sure NO ONE saw coming at all. Seriously... But still... it was really hard to get through, and it was really hard to read through my tears.

Also, I caught a handful of wrong names: Not for Christmas, or Easter, or in time for Skid's birthday.

The trio laughed, "Yeah. I even sketched what I thought it would look like. It's all cartoony, but I think it's really funny," Skid replied.

"I didn't see anything," said Skid, looking around innocently.

"Besides, I'm sure that wallowing in a pile of angst isn't what Demyx would have wished upon us," Skid reasoned.

Okay, I feel the need to point out what I just pointed out to my besties. The line about eating the strawberries aggressively. It reminded me of Dane Cook and his "OOOOH! THIS IS A DELICIOUS FUCKING PEAR!" line. XD

ok so I read this... a while back, I don't even remember when, but I keep finding myself coming to read it again. and again. and maybe again x10. I just love the characterization and the way everything happened made sense. Even Demyx killing himself made sense because too often people overlook those that seem happy on the outside when on the inside they are suffering and even hate themselves. And I love Roxas in this because I am kinda of obsessed with antisocial, moody Roxas who is very selective about friends. I could just... read about these guys all day.
I love it... and I love you for writing it.

Love this. And hate it in a weird good way. Fuck.

I don't remember if I've already made a review for this chapter, even though it was a while ago...

To be honest, I'd really like to see Roxas' issues with himself be concluded/addressed again. I don't mean to dictate, but I'm curious. The beginning chapters really got me feeling for him because he was so concerned in being more like Axel - outgoing, talkative, etc. He was really bent up about being introverted and not belonging. But then he started living with Axel and they weren't brought up as much. That stuff doesn't heal overnight, especially with his family issues, I know, but it'd be nice to see that element brought back.

Please keep updating, I'm hooked! And sobbing over Demyx's death and whatnot. TT_TT

Oh my gosh! Nobody could hate you! I think you are a genius who doesn't know it! You just shook up your story in a new way!

-_- (That's all I have to say really, because, why Demyx!? But I'm too addicted to you and this fic to "X out of it forever," no worries.)

I was going to leave a long review about how I loved this chapter, but I thought I'd just keep it simple. I loved it!

It wasn't cliche as goddamn fuck, but it sure was cute an goddamn fuck! WELL THAT WAS UNTIL ROXAS' MOTHER HAD TO BLOW HER DAMN GASKET. I hope Roxas can collect his shit from the house, because as materialistic as it is, your stuff is YOURS and you better be able to fucking keep it!

/smutsmutsmutyesyesyespleasee eee? xD

If u mean pick a pairing as in two boys then Axel and Roxas all the way!

God, I really like this. You're rad.

YES YES YES YES SO MUCH FUCKING APPROVAL! Xion's little plan worked and Axel quite literally face planted into realizing his feelings I'm happy Roxas accepted his to!