I overheard an interesting expression when riding the subway last week. "Dragon head, snake tail". I thought it was just the right one to describe how I felt about this story. Maybe you just don't get Grissom at all.

Grissom will NEVER do that. He loves Sara and she loves him back. This story is just shit.

Please leave Sara and Grissom alone. Just go back to write stories about Sofia, okay? Not Sara and Sofia.
Just Sofia.

One of the reviewers was so right. This is foul and unbelievable.

That's it? I was hoping for more. It was not the ending I was hoping for. Can you please write more?

Noo! This story can't end like this :(
I hope you make an epilogue or part two :)
Great story though.!

That's it? Grissom really cheated with Heather?
Not the ending I am expecting. I thought you could explore more into Sara's pain and recovery. I am hoping for a part 2. thanks for story! XD

No! You can't end it like that... :(

Hello, there! I'm not one to... judge someone else's writing, but I gotta say: you lost yourself pretty well in this one. You started out great, and I was always looking forward your updates, but now... I couldn't even believe it was the end, it's so dry cutted! Something happened and you couldn't continue the story? Also is notable how your english and bad use of commas were suddenly there. To me, you just got tired, but that's ok. Happy new year!

Thanks for the update. Not the ending, I expected. But sara is in the rght mind frame. She is aware, that she has to move on, start over. And wth the help of good friends, I feel sara will be fine. Thanks for a terrific story, I really enjoyed reading it.

Thanks for the update. Doesn't anyone acknowledge themselves, when at someone's door. If they can't sara doesn't have to open the door. Last time it was doug. Sara might think the same, and open the door. What if it's griss? Sara doesn't need to see him right now. Maybe sara needs to take her gun to the door? It's great that doug wants to help sara. I really think that it's griss at the door. He told sara, he, was leaving the next day, which is today now. Probably coming to get his things. That should be on sara's terms, not his. Please update soon, I really enjoyed this chapter as well.

more. more. lol. i need more. i need to know who is at the door now. i thinking heather. real unexpected for her to be there. or grissom? or greggggo!

*sigh
Grissom is a incredably honorable and loyal man and yet, lately, everyone seems to have him cheating..

Other then that, good job. Its well written, if also depressing to read.
Thanks for the constant updates! :)

Your english is just awful and it's ruining the story for me

oh. doug to the resuce. lol. great chaapter.

Awww...please please...let them be together...i love your story... :) xoxo