This is such an adorable piece! Well done!

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Awww it was such a nice story! It made me feel all warm inside. I love Lily and Snapes relationship as kids, you just made it more special!
Yet another great piece of writing!
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This was absolutely fantastic. Poor Lily, 11 years old and her sister already hates her. You did an excellent job with her and Sev. Sev is what I had her call him in my Lily and Snape fic too.

I really liked that you had a good reason for Sev having already made the bring something to life potion-very nice having him wanting to scare his father, but deciding Lily was a better use for the potion.

Sweet and cute and absolutely wonderful.