Reviews for Feelings in Hiding |
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Supreme Distraction chapter 1 . 6/30/2013 Aw... It ends here? Sadface. While the girls were a bit out of character for my liking, this was intriguing. Hopefully you would consider writing another that continues where this left off? |
Zelda's Hero chapter 1 . 2/23/2013 Looking forward to the next chapter! |
Roxius chapter 1 . 1/26/2013 It's funny; I wrote a yuri fic inspired by the exact same chapter, and even with a lot of those same themes and dialogue, like the changing in the locker room and the 'worship her breasts day and night' thing lol I guess it's very influencing. |
Major Mike Powell III chapter 1 . 11/29/2012 Well, well, soldier... HOO-RRAH! 1 review EVAR, btches! Now...I'm giggling like an idiot right about now. LOL I simply love this scenario: the 2 girls who're head-over-heels in love with each other, but they're too dumb to notice and confess. It's an instant classic! :D And of course, Samus and Zelda. They're pretty AW3SOME!, too. We've got Samus, who's as cool and badass as always, being a total perv yet loving. I particularly enjoyed that little dedication to Zelda's breasts. :3 Oppai. (Heart) And then, we have Zelda, who is as appropriate and well-mannered. *W* And then...wait, wha-?! This story is OVER?! ... Damn it! Don't tease, man! T_T That's just not right! DX I want more! (Bashes his head repeatedly against his keyboard) Damn it. Still! Good work, Marine! Semper-Fi! Carry on! |