I think you should write more when you can, as it is very sweet the guardians stopped the jealous spirts before it happens again, please and thank you.

I think you should write more where the man in the moon tells off Ida, cupied and spring for there anticks, please and thank you.

Awww that was very touching, thanks for the write!

I LOVE IT! THE FEELSSSSSS

I always love a story that spirits think Jack is not worthy to become a Guardian, or some jealous.

Great story sad but sweet :)

Love it. I always wondered what the other spirits would think. You should make another one with some other spirits in it.

I really love this story, good job!

i love this :D awesome job.

i like how you have a pilgrim instead of a giant turkey like most others use. it makes it more interesting and a lot more sense. lol its kind of morbid for a turkey to be the spirit of thanksgiving when a turkey is what everybody eats lol so kudos to you :D

and like i said awesome job :D

Those three are just jealous cause Jack is a sweetheart & far more awesome than they will ever be.

Thanks for writing & sharing.

You are going to be famous one day. It's my fav Jack Frost story yet!

aw. sweet

Cute! I LOVE JACK FROST! :3

best story ever keep up the good work.

Yay for Jack! No one can say he's a nusiance, GOT IT?! (yells at other mean spirits and chases them around with a glowstick)

This is such an amazing story!