| Reviews for My Heart Beats For You |
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Random Peep chapter 3 . 7/21/2013 Aahhh poor Bella, hopefully things will get better. Awesome job, loved it and can't wait t see what happens! P |
4evernaya chapter 3 . 3/31/2013 omg please finish |
duralast406 chapter 3 . 3/30/2013 please update this soon ! i feel bad that bella is going through all of this but why didn't you make her turn into a wolf right when she started getting mad that would have been so awesome ! and jake getting punched was priceless lmao .. cant wait to read more |
ClownWhosFeelnDown chapter 1 . 3/23/2013 gfn |
Skylar Datenshi chapter 3 . 2/9/2013 Aww... When is Bella going to shift? |
Skylar Datenshi chapter 2 . 2/9/2013 O.o Billy is her uncle? Oooh boy, Bella, you're a shifter! |
Guest chapter 3 . 1/28/2013 Damn. Bella is an animal. |
Guest chapter 2 . 1/28/2013 I hope that Bella'll be able to hold her own in a vampire attack. |
thatdamnyank chapter 3 . 1/30/2013 okay so this ending confused me because why would bella want "all this" from jacob if he's billy son that makes him her cousin and that's just nasty lol and in chapter one you said she was coming to forks to get answers for why she is changing but if she didn't have the answers how the hell does she know what imprinting is and that there is an animal inside her? i really do enjoy this story but the end of this chapter just threw everything else outta whack |
megycool2 chapter 3 . 1/29/2013 Omg continue please pleasr |
Guest chapter 3 . 1/27/2013 Good story thus far but doesn't Billy being Bella's uncle make Jake her cousin? So her flashback talking to Jake is written wrong. Why would Bella be into him? They're cousins... It was also just thrown out about Bella already knowing she's imprinted but yet she doesn't know what the Cullen's are? Few discrepancy and holes but fixable. Can't wait to see your posting. |
Dandigirl chapter 3 . 1/29/2013 Great story, kind of confused about a few things though. So is Jake her cousin, or is Billy not his father? Because Renee is Billy sister so that would make Jake her cousin. Does Bella know everything about the pack, like imprinting and stuff? If so she should have known she was turning into a wolf already, and if that was the case, that the Cullens were vampires. Which would make the posturing scene not so confusing to her. I guess you could say that all the memories came rushing back at once and she puts it all together in that last scene. In which case Bella is kinda dense. Anyway very interesting so far. |
lynettecullen chapter 1 . 1/27/2013 Bella is a professional at all things awkward. |
Arial Wolf chapter 3 . 1/27/2013 so she already knows all the wolf stuff and vamp stuff and that is why she going on a rolla costa excellent thanks |
Neb87 chapter 3 . 1/27/2013 Great update, loving this story! hopefully more soon?! :) |