Not logged in. So mew recommended you and I'm finally making my way to your profile (sorry for taking so long). I really liked this actually. I liked how through a flashback you manages to kind of end on a high point. I also liked your background of Demeter being the reason for their breakup. Anyway, thanks for writing :D

Beatiful...
You know what brought my attention to this?
I was listening to Little Lion Man by Mumford and Sons.