I need more of this one and how their lives play out! yhis story is amazing! well written!

Its so beautiful... I love IT
But, is this the end..
Actually the story could be ended as one shpt
But the second is rally sweet and I dont know.i Will
Love to inow that .. maybe they Will find more youkais
And hanyour hidden but the founded and Will hace a familiy I dont know but I love this story

Such a beautiful story! The first chapter was so full of loneliness and pain that it made me teary, but I love all the soft and warm feelings of the second chapter.

Thank you for sharing tgis stpry with us! Hugs

This was a wonderful ending. :) I was wondering if they'd ever settle down and have kids though.
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I want another chapter

So beautifully written. I loved it. It's simply a heartwarming story

I like this gentle story. It's not filled with battles, fighting, and drama. I like the story of delving into their thoughts and feelings and of an unhurried day without any plans. I need this. Thank you.

I like this story! thank you for writing this.

loved it

Aw..that was a sweet ending to their beginning. Very nice. Thanks so much.

This is just beautiful. Very sad but wonderful for them to have found each other.

This was such a cute little story! I wish you had made it longer but I thoroughly enjoyed it regardless! Thank you!

aww, i wish that wasnt the ending... i would have liked to see them have kids... but if that ever happened, what would the kids be? would they too live forever? considering their parents lineages, would they be hanyo? or since kagomes a faily strong miko, would they alternate full breeds of each race from child to child? could be some fun ideas to toy with, dont you think?

please update

very sweet

i like