Reviews for A New Storm
Guest chapter 12 . 10/18
Two years since an update!? Don't stop now! You know how hard it is to find a nice good anime halo crossover with main character being an odst? I love what you done and loved your fic, till I got to last chapter and made me wish you had lots more. Please don't stop, this is far by one more interesting odst fics that I found. Especaully with anime
Guest chapter 1 . 10/3
I rather enjoyed this fic but personally instea did him nuking himself and ending up in monster world, I think should been something more believable. Such as a forerunner artifact or perhaps a slipspace rupture that he fell through. Perhaps showing up around the time te odsts were dropping into new Mombasa or an forerunner artifact teleported him whil heavily wounded from battle. Their also some other things that bother me but over all I do like the story and find myself rereading a few times and awaits your next update. Please contue to update this.
Odst fan chapter 12 . 10/2
While looking up some rosarovampire crossovers I found this story of a gem and must say I like it. Not some complain that's odst seem betrayed almost Spartan like but odsts' did have peak human condition and odsts were battle hardened and have seen the worst the war had to offer. While not super human like Spartans the odsts are still well known for getting the job done and taking on missions that would be normally suicidal. The story I am liking and I do like that despite him being bad ass even Andrew had trouble going against some monsters at yokai high but their something that he used to fighting.

Anyways I hope your still around and eventually come update this story again.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/1
Guess inner moka should count herself lucky andrew never encountered the flood.
Apple424 chapter 12 . 5/28/2019
Can’t wait for the next chapter love the story
MrSo chapter 12 . 3/30/2019
This was ficking great so more !
Jeff chapter 2 . 6/29/2018
Okay, I get ODST’s are badass, but they are still human. Adult humans, they weren’t children like the Spartans. They’re the best you can get without some sort of augmentations(as a matter of fact, ODST’s aren’t the biggest fans of Spartans, because they were drugged up to make them better. While the ODST’s had to get there on their own). That said, some of these things you have this ODST doing are just a bit much. They’re things you’d expect from a Spartan, not an ODST. Th portrayal of ODST’s here isn’t quite accurate.
cchazyboy chapter 8 . 3/26/2018
#TeamMokaAndAndrew
Pruneo chapter 12 . 3/22/2018
I really liked this please continue with the writing
Guest chapter 12 . 3/7/2018
You know, I wonder how a Commissar from the Imperium of Man would react to these mutants, daemons, and/or xenos... (actually, the outcome is pretty obvious. It involves bolt rounds and Exterminatus Extremis.)

Ave Imperator
Goldspark1 chapter 12 . 1/31/2018
Thanks for the chapter.

Nice job on the details with the Magnum. It really is a powerful weapon that can kill a Hunter if aimed correctly. It makes this story have backstory. Where their are weapons and powers, yet have context on how those powers work and stick by it. Far better than most Anime where you just invent a new power for your hero.

Did not like how Andrew did not ask his slaves if they wanted to be free. It would be great to have healer/warrior elves in case danger ever strikes. Yet slavery doesn't sound like the best choice to bridge the gap between humans and elves. So long as Riku and Miku both agree to willingly allow themselves to follow him and choose to learn the ways to hurt people, then I will rest my complaint.

Did enjoy the recap of the battle in the previous chapter. He got smashed into concrete by a force greater than any human can give. So when he recapped his battle with Kahula, it felt humbling to have him admit his weaknesses. Had she punched any harder, his entire rib cage would have been crushed.

Liked all the flaws you gave the man of the house, Issa. A farther to beautiful children, with more wealth than he knows what to do, yet can't get simple communication with his family.
Jaggers2003 chapter 12 . 1/30/2018
You’re actually alive and writing damn well have fun writing
SPARTAN-626 chapter 12 . 1/30/2018
YOUR ALIVE!
Razgriz Eternal chapter 11 . 12/24/2017
When is the next chapter
304th'sMan chapter 11 . 9/25/2017
You forgot "Praise KEK!" lol, jk. Anyway, this was a great chapter and I have yet to be disappointed. I cannot wait to see how this will go down with two servants and such!
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