I like the story!

I was expecting it to be mostly post war. In your summary, you say “in the wake of war” which means means coming after and affected by the warlike the wake of a ship means the effects of the ship passing. I think you might mean “on the brink of warthe war is about to start in earnest and they are trying to accomplish their task before that.) There is also “in the heat of war”.

I love how Draco evolves, and adrenaline junkie Draco is a fascinating spin on his character. Ginny is well written, and much more developed than her canon self, who exists mostly in response to Harry.

Thanks for writing!

Yes! Loved their meeting again, their tones and dialogue were perfect, and alas Moody unable to keep his moods in check, tsk tsk

Ahh yes, Draco should be making his entrance soon! Curious to see Ginny's reaction

The insight the three of them have into Riddle's thought process and how they discuss it is quite interesting, and the fact that Rowena's artifact is a desk and not a tiara is apt :P

A bit overuse of commas here and there, but overall the SPAG is perfect, I like the focus on how the memories are affecting Ginny

Good to see some action, liked the descripton of Ginny's emotions as she stole the cup, hope to see some Drinny interaction soon!

Ha, muggle equivalents of Draco, wonder what mischief they'll get into

Ahhh your Dumbledore characterization is perfect, his argument with Moody in the beginning was spot on with how I imagine it would play out in the books as they likely had a similar conversation at some point about Harry

Great build up in this chapter and description of what Ginny's feeling as she realizes why Dumbledore's alive and confesses the memories she has

Really like your characterization of Draco here, your writing and exposition is great but I hope to see a bit more action/speaking in the next chapters

You're writing is beautiful, can't wait to see where this goes

Ah what a relief!

Good read

Third time read and it still gets to me :D

Pleaseeee update this. I cant go on not knowing what happens next. The plot was really good draco and ginny going on the mission together. And ginny going there for the second time with her horrible memories of her previous experience. And the last chapter was exciting as hell. You captured the emotions correctly and i like how you are not rushing into draco and ginny's relationship. I really hope you update this. Its so good. :D