I was so entranced by this story. I was like saying,' Okay, ooo, nice, uhuh.' But then I read the last line. "Paste your document here..."

Good start. I can see this going down hill and turning into something being trashed down the also I can see it becoming something more and becoming a great story. I'll follow it and find out. Keep it up!

Ah...I've been inactive for a month so I have a lot of catching up to do on reading your stories. My god, you have to be the best writer on FF.N, I swear. You should write a M rated story for this lovable foursome.

You know im imagining myself in this situation in place of Finn and all I can say about that is "Damn you HVK you put me in the best postion I have ever been in! Thank you, Thank you to Heaven almighty!"

overall good oneshot

:O HVK!
Saw ''Flumbaline'' and thought, ''yeah, HVK ships that,'' and it turns out IT'S YOU!
Hmmm... an enhancement to FP's Elemental Matrix, eh?

You sir are a person who deserves reconightion your stories always give me a smile please continue looking forward to more.

can't wait to see where this goes! keep going!

Cute. Very well written like always. Looking forward to reading more of your work.