I have read this story so many times. I just love the way the skin on her back effects him. He really is an idiot.

Very nicely done

OMG! "I want you" "you got me" *melts*

This is EXACTLY what needs to happen in the show. Mac needs to turn up to some event where you're supposed to let your hair down and she needs to do it in a dress that Will cannot possibly be able to resist, resulting in them making up, making out, getting married and having mini-Macs and Wills and then living to ripe old age together. Can we just send this to Sorkin with "HINT" stamped across it in massive letters and bright red ink? That would be awesome!

Bonus love for including Charlie and having them dance! You are a fic writer after my own heart. Which may have melted at the end of this. :p

Goes without saying (though I shall say it anyway!): thanks for posting :D

This is really lovely! I love him being mesmerized by what she's wearing, and Charlie knocking some sense into them.

Ohhh...a new chapter of Going Home and a stand alone? What a gift! Now I know what you meant about cheeky Will...and I love it!

"May I ask you a wildly inappropriate question?" Ha! Yes Will, please go ahead! Ask a few wildly inappropriate questions if that gets the two of you back together!

Loved it!

wow great to see a new story.

It is so beautifully written...

AND I LOVE THE ENDING FOR SURE!

awww - what a cheeky little story... loved it matey... :)

Loved Mac's flirting in the car with him and the dances... awww!

A Big CHEER for Charlie for taking them there in the first place and then for the little chats with both of them!
Well done Charlie!

"Not if you want him. But be very sure about what you do want as he wouldn't survive you leaving again."
"Neither would I, Charlie." - really liked these lines...

Hey - Thanks for posting - enjoyed reading this... :)
Would LOVE to see them go to an event like this on the show!
x

great story

Loved it!

I love Charlie! He knows how to handle both of them. Will and Mac just belong together.