Say, not said. Please consider using proper grammar. It makes it so much nicer. It's still a really cool story though, but you can make it at least 80% better so far

No. You meant inconceivable. Inconsiderable means something completely different than what you want. Lol

What happened it's been over 2 years

Truly hoping that you continue this story at some point, tales of vesperia is probably my favorite RPG of all time and adding Naruto on top of that just makes it all the better.

This story is old but worth it where r u put more chapters up please

You made Naruto very weak, it's bad.
A man who fought along with madara could not handle the bear alone?

I seriously love this story so far.

I read your profile about how you dropped the Naruto stories you had. I agree that what happened did kinda ruin Naruto as a whole, but I personally just shove it to the back of my mind and pretend it never happened. While I can't stop you from doing what you've done, I can't say that I'm not disappointed that you didn't stay the course. What you've written so far has been good and maybe someone will pick up the story and finish it.

Sorry you couldn't complete the story.

It happens sometimes.

Man this is a good story. Though from the look of the date it was last posted, it hasn't been updated in three years, are you planning on posting the next chapter or are you just going to leave it?

I don't think that Rita will get along with Judith because of what she is pursuing and the other reason is because of Naruto's interest on her.

Judith is hard to top because when you see her appearance she is rather attractive I wonder if she is a Elf because her appearance reminds me of this Race.

The question now is will Naruto help Judith and lose out the friendship of Rita or will it be something else entirely.

The question is what Artes will Naruto do because chakra is more powerful thatn Artes in my opinion because if you have seen Naruto in the Fourth Shinobi War you should know this by now.

I wonder why Naruto hasn't used his full ability as a Ninja because the Shadow Clones and Rasengan are basic things why hasn't he used his Wind Rasengan because he has access to Elemental techniques.

This chapter was good but I don't understand why Naruto loves Sakura because in the canon she had no feelings towards him more like sibling love instead of intimate love.