Just want to say that i loved you story! The way you portrayed jack was great and i also loved the little monologues at the beginning of every chapter.

I like how you reflected on each begining themes. Great story!

Jack would say that in a situation like that.

Awesome start!

I loved the last two paragraphs
And then again I loved the story overall, good job

I aplaud your writing skills. And was yoinks from Scooby doo?

jacks story will be continue

Very fun story! I was screaming at Pitch for a lot of it. Quite a bit of it was for Jack, but also for Jamie, who had to watch so much of that. It was cool to see the power that Jamie gives Jack because of his belief. Great job!

Yay!cold and darkness my two favorite things

You know the crazier the story the more it shows you have low mental health

Gran final me encanto

Hi, mmm...lol

Pliss continue, you are so good in this story

Hola, no se hablar mucho ingles pero si se leerlo, quiero decirte que me encanta tu fiction, eres muy buena escribiendo, y en lo personal, yo como escritora, digo que eres buena, bueno en este momento no tengo un canal...pero si escribo pequeñas historias que son leidas por mis amigos y familiares, por fa continualo

ATTE: ZARAH FLORES

Absolutely amazing! I would have to say this is by far one of my absolute favorite fanfictions! It keeps me on the edge of my seat no matter how many times I read it. It is so creative and original, and simply amazing! Sorry about repeating words, but I just love it so much.

Gasp! Nice ending, there!

i LIKE THE IDEA A LOT! Oops, caps. :)