Kinda wish this had a sequel...

That was great! You can almost see Asuka just about to blow a cork. Long chapter and well done. Misato trying to get advice from Kanji. But, very open ended finish. Were you going to continue this and never did? I really enjoyed this.

I liked your chapters man,I hope you can do more of them, please do, don't make me beg as if I'm the opposite gender or a you get version of myself to do so, I would like more chapters of this, it is always interesting to read fanfictions, it gives an idea of may kinds of scenarios that could have happened but haven't, like in evangelion.

This is really good, I'm only halfway done with CH 1 and I love the depth the story so far. Such a touchy subject and maybe Asuka is a little too hateful but, nicely done!

I hope this won't be your only submission to this site because I quite enjoyed your writing. It was fascinating to follow Shinji and Asuka's parallel revelations - that they and the important people in their lives are caught at standstills and that forward direction will have to come from the children.
My impression was that the story was set in an alternate universe where the threat of angel attacks was not so dire (something like "Angelic Days") and it was interesting how you subtly established that world - Gehrin's continued existence, referring to the Geofront as merely a "laboratory" and Asuka describing her work as being a "lab rat" rather than a soldier.

I really liked this story! It seemed to fit the characters very well, and I like how it ended kinda hopeful.

Nice to see another fic on Shinji being a girly boy. Looking at him now, knowing that, makes me want to dress him up and molest him. I even remember seeing a thread in Desuchan's /tr/ section in which Shin-chan's girlish looks and personality were specifically discussed, like how his character design deliberately goes against the traditional shounen hero archetype. Until then, I hadn't realized just how femme Shinji really was; I thought he just happened to look really good in a dress (or makeup, or Asuka's plugsuit), but he was meant to be a femboy all along.

The weird, the freak, the misunderstood, it's always interesting to see how different people write about these different situations. After reading the first chapter I was pleasantly surprised with this story, not only is it in a type of situation that is possible, but you fit it into Eva-verse in a way that could possibly come to pass.

I have to admit, while starting to read the second chapter, I momentarily thought you had accidentally re-posted the first chapter, but after reading a little ways, I was very pleased with what it turned out to be.

I guess to put it in 5 words or less; Very nice, I liked it.

Oh man, this was amazing. I'm kind of sad that there isn't more to this. I would really enjoy seeing a follow up to this.

This story was simply beautiful, it flowed so well together that its actually changed my opinion on Shinji/Asuka relationship! The major factor in loving this story is how it flowed and melded so well together in how the characters felt about themselves and how they reacted together. Truly masterpiece!

Wow this is very good!

okay seriously! another chapter please! this was just getting interesting!

This had some strange touching moments, but I enjoyed it alot. I'll be checking out any other eva fics you write in the future.

At first I thought this was a Shinji Bashing fic, the subject matter is unusual but it's really good, the scenes were detailed and beleivable and your interpretation of Asuka was spot on in my opinion.

"Wow", as someone said earlier.

This is quite a beautifully written fic. Asuka's characterization and arc are especially compelling here.
All of the characterizations are top notch actually.
I admit wasn't sure what to expect, but I genuinely loved this fic and would love to see the relationships explored even further. I was really quite sad to see "Complete" in the status bar.
Maybe more? Please?
Once again... really well done!