I really loved this! It was an enjoyable read and I hope you continue to write for this fandom, maybe you might even write a little smut on day for this pairing? But regardless great job! I really enjoyed reading this :3

I like how you wrote, "the boy who ran with wolves," it actually sounds familiar, like a movie title or something

I also like that Jackson was instinctually protecting Isaac.

Nice ending

Nooooo! You are so cruel. I guess that's a good thing; to push your readers into overwhelming feelings like frustration, anxiety, etc. It must mean that you're a good writer to elicit such feelings in others. I'm glad they finally had "the talk"

Intriguing. I hope Stiles isn't too candid about the whole thing... Who am I kidding? Stiles is always candid.

I loved really Derek's perspective. Poor guy, he's so conflicted. But I LOVED that Stiles pitifully asked Derek to lie next to him. I loved the cuddling. Hopefully the future will hold more cuddling

I love the cuddling!

Okay, you answered my question in this chapter. Stiles is back on task.
This chapter was concerning and unsettling. Very paranormal. I want him to go to Derek and hug him and explain then everything will be alright in the world. :)

So does he not really remember his convo with the voice? Or is he just shrugging it off and not going into detail because of his specific task? I'm so worried that he's going to forget his task

I love it so far

So cheesy and you nailed Stiles perfectly I hope we actually get Sterek storylines because we can all see it. When asked about it Tyler and Dylan said that it was up to the writers and MTV and that they would be fine with the storyline...fan girl blowout over that statement during the comic book convention especially when they took each others hand.

omg i just did a happy dance at the ending :D :D :D :D That was a brilliant fic! It was such an interesting and awesome idea, thanks for sharing! (I can't stop grinning now!) Keep up the great work!

:) done reading. Sleep now. Proper review in the morning but so many things that I loved in the final chapter and in the whole story.

Need to stop and go to bed but can't stop. This far too good. Just finished chapter 8 and WHAT THE HELL? YOU ARE EVIL! LOL. I'm still in shock at how that ended! Need to breathe, then need to read the last chapter ( breathe). Woah. And also, I love it, Stiles' fear and Derek's such emotional agony at stiles thinking he'd hurt him. I love the way you write Derek. BUT YOU ARE KILLING ME WITH THE WAY THAT CHAPTER ENDED! I should be asleep right now, but have to read the end. And just HAD to stop and say all this before I could even look at the St chapter.

So I'm only partway through the story but i had to stop and review when I hit chapter six cause I had to let you know how much I love that chapter being in Derek's POV. Most people in all the other Sterek fic I've read have done the relationship as coming from stiles first. So I absolutely love seeing it here from Derek's side, and getting all his thoughts
and feelings. It is such a nice change and was so well written. I'm really enjoying the story overall so far ( love how you wrote the opening battle) but chapter six just really stood out to me because of the way you showed the struggle and love from Derek's side. Him holding back and watching from a distance then being in stiles room and holding back
from going to him just broke me. You did such and amazing job with this chapter. And I shall let you know more all the things I loved about the story once I finish it. ( and sorry if this is broken up weird, I'm typing on a tablet and it is so freaking difficult to type quickly with this onscreen keyboard!)

Beautiful story, simply wonderful. The cliffhangers were just right and I absolutely loved the characters in this. The story was just perfect and so visually powerful. I don't like to admit it, but I had tears in my eyes and that doesn't happen very often. Don't ever stop writing!