| Reviews for The Captain |
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  storylover chapter 6 . 8/25/2014 this is a wonderful story, i like it very much. But i thing i should tell you that unless you are referring to the one true God, Jesus Christ, god is spelled with a little g. it makes all the difference, God Bless |
| i like it chapter 1 . 2/1/2014 wow, its extremely detailed. you should write a book... i have an idea for one |
 Deactivated17 chapter 10 . 1/4/2014 Omg so cute! Sequel please! |
| The Champion of Kirkwall chapter 10 . 1/4/2014 Awww. So sweet. I loved this. |
| Millz chapter 10 . 5/18/2013 This story was great - I loved it! You were effective in the way you wrote and the characters emotions were very well displayed and used...I just loved it! :) |
| MoonlitSorrows chapter 1 . 4/6/2013 Awwww, this story is so cute. I love it. |
| irl be there in a heartbeat chapter 10 . 1/16/2013 THAT'S THE CUTEST THING I HAVE EVER READ . AWWW! Desi... You are just... She reminds me of... Awwww! :') And steve is so sweet! Him and Jean! AWWWWWW! |
| alyssa chapter 10 . 1/16/2013 If it's over make sure you put completed in the info bar thingy |
| cloudgirl9 chapter 10 . 1/15/2013 awwwwwwww! WAIT but why was Desi sobbing in the kitchen? Because it was all so adorable? What? |
| irl be there in a heartbeat chapter 9 . 1/14/2013 Hah he got hit :) still a cute story though :) |
| cloudgirl9 chapter 9 . 1/5/2013 ahhh! ohmygoooodddd! UPDATE! |
| irl be there in a heartbeat chapter 7 . 1/1/2013 Cuuuute! :) |
| Cerulean89 chapter 8 . 12/30/2012 wow I love the twist. Please update soon |
| Applejax XD chapter 8 . 12/29/2012 awww... my heart started to break when steve acted like that to jeanette, i hope things get solved soon XD |
| NorthWest9 chapter 8 . 12/29/2012 :O UPDATE! Lol and then get Jeanette to kick Steve's ass or something ;P lol |
