Wow, I could definitely see all of this happening, its exactly how these two would act towards eachother, very well done -

I'll bet this happened a lot in the beginning. Forget that. I'll bet this happned a lot period. (minus the part about her being permanently left in the Fungeon). You wrote this very well. The characters sound like the movie and I can just see this playing out in my head. Well done!

very nice! have you thought about writing more? maybe vanelloppe gets in trouble again :)

Turbo forgot to mention that she would DIE if the game was unplugged. Vanellope might actually listen in that case.

FUCK YOU KING CANDY!

King Candy: A-a-are you going to execute me via your Shotgun or burn me?

Me: No. Something Worse.

King Candy: ...

( Later)

Candy (now as Turbo): LET ME GO!
Me: NO!
Candy: PLEASE! I'M SORRY! PLEASE! NO!
( Screams as he, strapped to the TF2 Payload bomb in a very painful position falls into the pit, which explodes)
Ralph: Well, I could have just wrecked him.
Me: But the bomb way was a better way of killing him anyway.

Good story, and a real tearjerker. POOR VANELLOPE WAAAAAAAH

The Wild West Pyro

Ahhhh, you should write more. :D

this is great. i really like it and think its very well written.

Tons-o-luv
TreesAndCheese

OMG! The mental images this gives me! I can see him doing all of this. I want to draw a scene from this. Oh, I just hope it turns out good. I love this story!

Really great job! Poor Vanellope :(

That is horrible how he's trying to manipulate her but other than that this is some good writing

that is low for candy king