| Reviews for Rampant Rabbit |
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  Guest chapter 14 . 7/19/2019 Please continue this story for a second part with Holly x Sandy x pitch please it was sooo good |
 tunescar17 chapter 14 . 3/1/2016 That ended abruptly. |
| AUehara chapter 14 . 1/20/2016 This pairing is different, granted, I'm a snowbunny shipper, but this one got me. Or maybe it was your story. Loved it! ... I was going to say more, but I forgot what it was... Sleep do that to me xD... But anyways! Nice story. And I definitely will read your other stories! . AUehara |
| lil mikey21 chapter 6 . 7/15/2015 Make another or a prologue |
| Breast.Waist.Hips.OHMY chapter 1 . 3/14/2015 i swear when i got to the end of this i thought i was on chapter 3 or 4! this one chapter covered so much! it is awesome! |
| nameless-ice-goddess chapter 1 . 8/26/2014 cute |
| SerpensPrincess chapter 13 . 8/8/2014 If u havent already wrote the sequel tht is |
| SerpensPrincess chapter 14 . 8/8/2014 Please i would deeply appreciate if u wrote the sequel i relly liked this story and im sure ill love the sequel |
| Fireworks chapter 15 . 4/3/2014 This was an AMAZING story to read it had such a great plot what just kept on pulling you in with so many twist& was also wrote out really good.I loved all your OCs they were all very unique. I can't wait to read your squeal witch I just know is going to be good. Thanks for this great story-fireworks |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/2/2014 I hate this slash ...but... nIGHTMARE BEFOFE Xmas lay it on ms ... Not entirely ! |
| That-Cheeky-Bat chapter 15 . 12/9/2013 Whoo I liked it! Also read this a bloody year late lol. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/20/2013 Bunny be nice to Skellington now ! |
| Mike P chapter 1 . 7/26/2013 In overall, great storyline, original character(hopefully?) and passionate story like none other. You use a wide range of vocabullary and weave them together as a true experienced author would, with a balanced amount of adventure and love story in your fic. Spelling mistakes are common ones and understandable despite being quite frequent in all chapters such as the use of "though" might want to look and fix those. HOWEVER, simple grammar mistakes as for "your" instead of using "you're" is VERY FREQUENT, not to mention the proper use of "their", "they're" and "there". I suggest you check again for the application for these words for they sometimes can be mildly to moderately disturbing and it stains your well made story, i notice there seems to be no improvement in these mistakes through the last chapter so it seems it's better to warn you. well, aside from that, good job. keep rising to the top. |
| Absolutely Fourtunate chapter 6 . 5/20/2013 Just want you to know, this story isn't allowed to have an ending. It's much too awesome. |
| Ravne13 chapter 7 . 4/27/2013 NOW look what you did! You put the link to that music video up, Love Like Woe, and I fell in love with the song. Now whenever I listen to it I start giggling like crazy envisioning Bunny/North smut! Try explaining THAT to your friends! Especially when NONE of my friends share my passion for fanfictions like I do. :D |
