Um, excuse me, this is a piece of art.

so good

Delightful. Thank you.

Very cute! Loved it!

Hey ! Loved this two shot ! It was really great !

Quite liked that version! Love the conversation between Merlin and Arthur too.

Yes. Finally Merlin gets recognition.
And caring Arthur is always the best...which is why Merlin whump is acceptable.

Great two-shot.

great chapter.

good chapter.

I read this so slowly just because I didn't want it to end.
Thank you for this wonderful fanfiction no matter how short it is.
I hope you write more like this as you're very good at it.
Well done and thank you.

Wonderful story! I really enjoyed it! :)

I dunno what you have about what happeed
Worked
Can you please find some way for Arthur to find out about morgana poisoning merlin because he always foils her plans or something? :) ?

Tee-hee-yay, someone else who took real notice of the fact that Colin really buffed up this time! I wasn't completely sure at first, with the loose jacket and all, but it's a lot more noticeable in normal street clothes on interviews ::whistles:: In other news, I liked the second half - Although I'll admit I was hoping for them to press Merlin for the truth as to why he showed up in such bad shape. I really really hope they include a reveal before the show ends...

bryne

Hi! First thing first don't be offended by what I say - this is a POSITIVE review, I loved this story :)

However I was hoping for a little more closure. Surely Arthur would have seen Merlin's injured leg, Gaius would realise that Merlin's been recently poisoned (because whatever happens in canon episodes, it would take time to recover from such a near death experience, no matter how many times Merlin has done so before). Yes you could argue that his magic speeds up the process but he is still going to have to explain to them why his leg was injured, why he was poisoned.

Next, it would be excellent if we got more closure regarding Sarrum (sp?). Perhaps a trial, just something short. Lastly, Daegal. It would be nice if we saw everyone attend the funeral, just a couple hundred words would suffice. No dialogue necessary, just having the charas heads bowed in respectful silence

Well this is me being picky - really I just didn't want your fic to end XD

These suggestions are only suggestions but I can understand if you felt that they were unnecessary additions to your story - really they start exploring a new side of things, and the repurcussions of Arthur knowing about Merlin's injuries, and the tense relationship between Camelot and Sarrum's kingdom following the trial could well blossom into an impossibly long fic.

Basically I'm saying "Here's what I would do, but I'm in love with your story how it is! *heart*"

Keep on writing, Moonlite Steak xxx

This is so adorable! I love the way you portrayed Merlin and Arthur, almost perfect! Even better than they do in the show these days :D
Well done
Keep writing
Love Tibbins xx