3 This was awesome

This was very well written and I got emotional. I like it.

This is good. Ended a bit earlier than expected. Seemed more like a backstory than a full tale. Ah well. Still an interesting read. Thanks for writing it.

I think this is like, the fourth time I've read this fic and it's still absolutely fantastic 3

i need 100 more chapters of this asap lol

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Great job!

I think it ended a bit too soon, but otherwise it was really cool. I loved the relationship development between Tony and Natasha.

Interesting to say the Least. But yet for his father to do that to his own son. And Charles trying to stop it but the Corruption within the government allowed it to continue along with money. Which makes the saying when comes to humans that "Money is the root of all evil." Which is true when consider what is going on in the private business world especially government contractor. I have heard plenti from whistle blowers and family and family friends that are or where within and in the know that would turn your stomachs. I know it did mine and those of my family within that are/were against it depends on whether still alive or past on that were against this crap. Though fiction to many writers authors have no idea how close to the Truth they are. And from what was written in this this is one of those cases. To many who work for agency or another simply follow orders blindly. While others try to challenge and change things and others just leave because they just can't do it anymore. And sometimes or more like all the time they threaten those individuals and their families lives and safety. I know mine has been threatoned mainly by out military and our intelligence community. But yet other agencies are keeping them at bay as best they can but not always succeeding. I have many family members who were murdered assassinated. But yet also bad apples who do give a shit and behind some of this crap. And their are some family by adoption or marriage with some by blood that make the rest of us look bad.

If I could I would place a citizen arest with my local Sheriff and Interpol because of how far their crimes go. But since they are not in. The county and State where I live and because lack of means to travel long distance. Mostly financially.

And I know it takes a lot for people to gain my trust. Because it has to be earned because I don't trust blindly.

Never this.

Amazingg

I SO LUV THIS FANFIC POOR TONY T_T OH THE DRAMA AND ANGST AND THE CONNECTION BETWEEN TONY AND NATASHA AND THE TRUST THEY HAVE BETWEEN EACH OTHER I LOVED IT THOUGH IT WOULD BE GREAT IF YOU CONTINUES THIS BECAUSE THE ENDING IS A BIT DULL AND LIKE IT SHOULD BE CONTINUED KEEP UP THE AWESOME WRITING AND EXPECT ME TO BE READING MORE OF YOUR WORK XD XP X3

wow.. that was good. realistic. everyone in character. just.. loved it. :) thank you.

oh, tony...

I loved this :)