Do come back and finish this story. I would like to see where you go with it. It has great potential!

I’ve been binge reading you stories and they’re all so good. I was hoping you’d finish this even after a long hiatus. You’re a great writer.

I hope you decide to finish this story. I loved the first one too.

Too bad you didn't go further with this story, it was full of promises. Feel free to come back any time...

Please post again it's very good

Please come back and continue this!

Would love to know how this story would go! Any chance of it being finished?

This was good I hope you continue.
I am confused though. If this was sequel to Natural Equalibrium I thought Deeks signed his sgent papers sfter funeral?

Ohhhhh no...nuh uh... you can't just leave this here. Doesn't work like that. I've read all your stories now and well. ..I need to know that they made it past this... maybe even decide to have a baby a few years down the road... so to recap this is sooo good and I care so much about these characters that I am demanding some resolution LoL

Wow!

Please update! I really wanna know what happens!

hey there, I just re-read that story and I was wondering if there was any chance of you updating it? I'd love to read some more.

Please update soon really loved this story!

This is so incredibly emotional! I just spent the last two days reading all of your stories and they are all perfect! I love all the metaphors you use, they all perfectly capture the moment. Can't wait to read more from you!

I've been sick in bed for 2days straight:p I would've died from boredom without this story (and the previous one).. Please update asap