After Good Luck Lolita another wonderful story by you, love it, enjoyed it ,end was really good, I cried a lot when Hermione died, you write so good, please keep on writing SSHG fanfics

Wonderful, Just Great... I'm sooo happy

I'm literally crying, please don't this to Hermione,to Severus, they both don't deserve this

A very cute story! Well done.

Me encanto tu historia, esta para una secuela, pobre Severus, seria hermoso que fuera una niña. Pero ya no con tanto susto, de verdad me arrancaron unas lagrimas pensando que Hermione no lo lograba y haber si ahora no le toca otro medico incompetente esta vez.

I love the song "Don't take the girl"!
You seriously had me crying thinking there was no way to revive her. Overall, a great story. Thanks!

hermione slap a teacher? okaaaay

Sequel

Using the lyrics to a country song just ruined the whole story in my opinion because now I can't really take this seriously.

Ha. Was so hoping Severus would nominate Hermione herself to put the Malfoy clan in its place.

metaphorically, not hypothetically. geez.

That... honestly was a decent little speech.
Pity speechifying is a poor way to have a marriage, innit?

Not like he did anything wrong there, they weren’t married yet AND he’s still a figure of authority. Hermione, as far as I remember, is still respectful towards people holding such position. So for her to have slapped him, and later on feel smug and think “he was learning”? Uh... no.

This story was amazing and enjoyed it!

I liked your story. Thank you for sharing it with us.