This is so good! I really wish there was more!

Well would you look at that? My heart! It's bleeding! Haha that's cool, thank you for this wonderful piece of writing it was lovely

thanks for ripping my heart out
(i swear i don't ship phan
...
)

awwh, insecure!dan in a friends-with-benefits situation is nice to read. (he's often just a heartless jerk in phanfics haha.)

I AM GOING TO MURDER YOU THAT WAS WONDERFUL I NEED MORE GOD DAMN

Ph my lord cliffhangers will be the death of me!

I really liked it! You're a great writer and I see a lot of potential in this. You should write more stories. I think you'd be great at it!