| Reviews for Pack of Wolves |
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jadesabrexiv chapter 19 . 7/10 I’m prepping my Guillotine Right now. I found a HTML copy of this fic on an old flash drive and gave it a read. It get to the end of this chapter and the image of Harry’s face enraged enough to scare Satan made me eager for the next chapter...then to come and find no next chapter. Are you okay? Are you still writing, this is good stuff. I hope everything is okay and that you didn’t quit. Stay healthy and know that there is at least one fan looking forward to seeing you write again. JSX |
Guest chapter 12 . 6/14 Hurrah another gay Lockhart stupidity. |
Guest chapter 4 . 6/14 I remember why I stop reading the stupidity. Saving the Moron and gay draca. Apologies to a child abusers just part of the bullies and rapist lovers club. In small word, moron writer moron stories. |
Vanadir chapter 19 . 5/16 arggghhhh cliffy |
HarmonyEveryday chapter 19 . 4/20 Given the fact that this hasn’t been updated in going on seven years, I’m not optimistic that it will ever be or that the intended recipient will ever even see this review; but one can hope. I simply wanted to say that I hope you find the time and inspiration to continue with this and to thank you for sharing that which you’ve created thus far. Kudos! |
huntjd1 chapter 10 . 4/19 Up until this chapter I have really enjoyed this story but in this chapter you broke professor McGonagall's character that you have been building just to mold the story back to cannon even though you have been making it increasingly AU. I just cannot reconcile the McGonagall you have been building to the one that so easily dismissed Harry and his friends to preserve the cannon plot line. I am sorry but these appear to be two completely different McGonagall's in this story. As a result the following fight scene I just couldn't take seriously afterwords. It just seems like you up and jumped us into a completely different story. I am sorry but that was just a story breaking alteration to character. after all in past chapters she was firmly moved onto Harry's side over Dumbldork's. I am sorry I just could not focus on the second half of this chapter after this story breaking charter change I am currently debating if it is worth trying to continue onto the net chapter. Its just I cant like a story that has completely diverged from cannon then breaks the characters they have developed so they can return to a cannon story arc than should no longer be feasible. |
anjiepotter chapter 19 . 7/18/2019 i hope to read more. since i don't know when last updated, my hope in in vain i think |
princessdaisykelly chapter 19 . 5/11/2019 its 2019 this story hasn't been updated since 2013 PLEASE UPDATE SERIOUSLY DONT LEAVE A DAMN CLIFFHANGER WITHOUT UPDATING IN YEARS! |
princessdaisykelly chapter 5 . 5/8/2019 im gonna take a wild guess just shooting it out their that tonks is cam and im gonna take a stab at it and say she is cam because of her metamorphagus powers and cam is short for camouflage? btw the story is awesome |
brendan chapter 19 . 3/22/2019 I was going to say what a wonderful story, most sweet and full of friends etc.. should certainly last through the years and more i am enjoying it very much till the damn last page! not only you leave it by a damn killing cliff hanger... BUT IT'S WAY OVER THE TOP! ALMOST COMPLETLY AVOIDABLE AND UNCESSARY... They got transport keys, weapons, jewelery against some attacks. God damn the soul bond protection and mind link. WHY IS THIS FORGOTTEN HARRY WHOULD BE THERE IN AN INSTANT! even if the hall was sound proof. f#*k.. hermione not telling the twins or harry or stopping ginny and let continue is beyond me. There was only one moment that changed it for me, how ever maybe that lies with me. But this last page is infuriating! Anyway. I have the rant about this part not really about you per se only did it once elswhere cause i was fed up. Is the damn troll a fixed point in the damn fan fics or what? the couple of times i read it it was still amusing but i have read so many and now it's annoying/frustrating. It does not have to happen all of time so far i came across 3 including this one where it did not have to happen at all can totally be avoided... hermione is not lonely is friends with harry already stick up for each other, even if for the romance the dialogue afterwards here does not make sense. |
blushingpixie chapter 19 . 2/4/2019 I love it, please update soon. |
BratGirl1983 chapter 19 . 10/30/2018 I am really looking forward to the next chapters, please update. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/16/2018 Good |
Guest chapter 2 . 8/16/2018 Are you aware that fenir greyback was the one who but Remus as a child. |
Guest chapter 2 . 8/4/2018 SSTD more like STD |